AHW

During my writing camp, we made a digital story. Here is mine.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0KzORBZOze0

AHW

I just finished my writing camp at the Meadow Brook hall mansion, which is in Oakland University. We made a final presentation where we shared some of our writing, here is my presentation.

http://youtu.be/5yMY_zEJWLM

The frame

I stepped out of the uncomfortable taxi cab and handed the driver my money. I looked down at the wad of cash longingly, $500. All of my savings thrown away just to get a new start. I thought sadly. I got framed for a crime I didn’t do! Wait! Let me explain! A woman in a business suit came at my door at almost 12:00 at night saying I won a thousand dollars. The weird part was they said I had to take the money this instant or else I wouldn’t get it. At first I was happy that I won that much money! I was so happy I almost took it blindly. I was about to until they said I had to sign this piece of paper that I couldn’t read because of the light. They kept pressuring me to sign it until they couldn’t wait anymore. They said if I don’t sign in 5 seconds they would have to give the award to someone else! I was so desperate, I wasn’t thinking straight. I signed and took the money. Not 3 minutes later the police showed up and took me under arrest. It took 3 years for my name to be cleared and the bad guys to be caught, but even after that I couldn’t bear to live in Michigan anymore! I got mean looks even my own daughter got shunned because of me! I couldn’t take it anymore and moved to Chicago. Now I have a fresh start and I even got a new last name of me and my daughter. I have a fresh slate here for me to pursue any job, anything I have ever dreamed of doing! I won’t have to worry about people whispering ‘oh Suzie don’t play with the thief’s daughter, I don’t want you to get influenced.’ I am so glad that finally I get a new chance at life! I can help fix those kind of problems and raise awareness of thieves and how to catch them. More importantly, more people staying safe, without having their neighbors look at them like criminals just because they got framed. Even after the real criminals have been caught! I can help!

The Thunderstorm

“Quick, get into the house Amy!” Suzie yelled. Amy was sitting on the porch looking at the horrible disaster. This was no ordinary thunderstorm, it was an acid thunderstorm where anybody who touched the rain would get severely burned. Amy and Suzie are best friends and Amy came over for a sleepover just a couple hours ago. “No, it’s so pretty, I don’t want to go in.” Amy replied.  The acid in the rain makes it looks shimmery and magical to anyone who looks at it. They can’t resist touching it, but when they do they get burned severely. Amy started to reach her hand our getting closer and closer to the rain drops. “No! Amy, get back!” Suzie yelled frantically. In desperation she lunged towards and dragged Amy into the house and locked the door. “OMG (Oh my gosh)! Thank you so much for saving me Suzie! I might’ve died, I could’ve been in the hospital for a long time! The acid rain is made up of part acid, part poison and part rain. It’s mostly poison, though. “No problem, that’s what friends are for Amy, you would’ve done the same for me wouldn’t you Amy?” Of course, you said it yourself, that’s what real friends are for!” The laughed and ran to the kitchen to get themselves a snack.

Air Time

Yesterday I went to air time with some of my friends and as soon as I got there I was really excited to jump! We got out wristbands and went over to take our socks and shoes off. As soon as we were all ready we just about ran to the trampoline area, and I gingerly got on and started jumping. It was sooooooo fun! We went to the dodge ball area and got in the line to play. We also went to the foam pit where we had contests to see who could jump the farthest into the foam pit. I know for sure I'm going back to Air Time!

Air Time

Today for one of my friends birthday party we're going to Air Time, and I'm really excited. I've never been on a trampoline in my whole life! My parents are worried that I might break my neck or get really hurt. I had to convince them that it is safe to go to air time. I'll tell you about it another time.

Last Day of School

Even though I'm excited for my camps this summer, I'm really sad for the last day of school because I made bonds with all my friends this year. It seems right after I made close bonds with all my friends then we're getting split up for 7th grade. At least all my friends are going to see each other over summer break and during lunch next year. We're also going to be in at least one class together! I'm really sad to be graduating 6th grade. At least I'll make even more friends next year during 7th grade! Also since this might be my last blog post ever on this blog, I was wondering: Mr. Joe do you want me to keep writing??