Here is my AHW

Once upon a time long, long ago there was a boy name Lucas who was half horse, half human. Whenever he went to school everyone laughed at him and made fun of him. They all jumped on him but there as this one kid who always made the most fun of him, teased him the most. That person was his brother Jack. "Yo, giddy up horsy" he said to Lucas. "Leave me alone, and don't make fun of me." Lucas said "Fine, but you don't want to be late for your horse show" Jack siad while laughing. "Oh, by the way, I'm late for class. You better give me a ride or else." Jack made a punching motion into his fist. Lucas had no choice but to give Jack a ride. Becuase he gave Jack a ride he was the one who was late. But remarkably Jack was the one who was yelled at instead of Lucas. "I'll get you for this." Jack growled. For the rest of the day Jack was super nice to Lucas. But the next day he was extra mean; pushing, shoving, and name calling to Lucas. There was nothing Lucas could do to stop the bullying. One day Lucas saw a shooting star and he wished that just for one day, just one day that everyone would stop bullying him and he could be a normal boy. He thought in his heart it might work, but in his brain, he knew that it wouldn't work. So he went to sleep in his extra comfy bed that his parents gave him. The next morning his brother woke him up saying "Rise and shine my beloved brother!" "Hu???" Lucas asked very confused. When Lucas got to school, things just went from weird to the weirdest thing ever!!!!!!!!! "OMG, do you want to hang out, you're like sooooo cool." "What, are you talking to me?" Lucas asked