Here's my AHW

The First Day.
"Let's go to the mall." my dad said. "Ooo, what for? I asked. "Since the old computer broke, we have to look for a new computer." He answered. "Fine with me." my mom sighed. As we got into the car we started talking about what computer we each wanted. "I want a PC, for sure." my mom said with an air that plainly said she though she was right. "Well, I think we should get a Microsoft computer." My dad said with his voice that he used to get his way. "No, we should totally get a MacBook!" I told my parents  "No, definitely not." My parents said together. "Why can't we have a MacBook?" I asked. "Because it costs to much and is too small." My parents answered. After this conversation ended, my dad pulled up into the parking lot. "Hurry, hurry." my mom said while rushing us. "We walked into the huge red, green, blue, and yellow Microsoft store. My mom and I started looking around and found a small tablet. We sat down to look and play with it. My dad found a worker whose name was Joseph. "Hello, how can I help you." Joseph asked. "Hello, well I'm looking for a new computer." My dad told him. "Oh, well do you want a touchscreen, or just a mouse computer?" he asked. "Ohhhh, you guys have touchscreens? I didn't know that!" My dad exclaimed. "Oh, yes of course we do." Joseph said. "Okay, I'd like to see them." he replied. "Well right this way." came the answer. My mom and I headed towards the tablets. "Come on guys." My dad called. "Uggggg." I groaned. "Why can't we look at the MacBook's?" I sighed. "After this." came the reply. 10 minutes later we finally went to the Apple store. "OK, I'm going to look at the IPads." my mom said. "Kay, we're going to look at the computers." my dad answered.