My AHW

"Let's go to the mall." my dad said. "Ooo, what for? I asked. "Since the old computer broke, we have to look for a new computer." He answered. "Fine with me." my mom sighed. As we got into the car we started talking about what computer we each wanted. "I want a PC, for sure." my mom said with an air that plainly said she though she was right. "Well, I think we should get a Microsoft computer." My dad said with his voice that he used to get his way. "No, we should totally get a MacBook!" I told my parents  "No, definitely not." My parents said together. "Why can't we have a MacBook?" I asked. "Because it costs to much and is too small." My parents answered. After this conversation ended, my dad pulled up into the parking lot. "Hurry, hurry." my mom said while rushing us. "We walked into the huge red, green, blue, and yellow Microsoft store. My mom and I started looking around and found a small tablet. We sat down to look and play with it. My dad found a worker whose name was Joseph. "Hello, how can I help you." Joseph asked. "Hello, well I'm looking for a new computer." My dad told him. "Oh, well do you want a touchscreen, or just a mouse computer?" he asked. "Ohhhh, you guys have touchscreens? I didn't know that!" My dad exclaimed. "Oh, yes of course we do." Joseph said. "Okay, I'd like to see them." he replied. "Well right this way." came the answer. My mom and I headed towards the tablets. "Come on guys." My dad called. "Uggggg." I groaned. "Why can't we look at the MacBook's?" I sighed. "After this." came the reply. 10 minutes later we finally went to the Apple store. "OK, I'm going to look at the IPads." my mom said. "Kay, we're going to look at the computers." my dad answered. "OK." Siad my mom. While we were looking at the computers my dad seemed like he wanted the Microsoft computer more. "Papa, you really can't be leaning towards the Microsoft computer, can you?" I asked. "Why not, and yes I am." he said. "But-but the Apple computer is sooooo much better!" I exclaimed. "We'll see, right now it's time to go home."

The next day.

"Shin Be, we're going back to the Microsoft store because we might, 'might' get the computer. "Well, I still want a computer so I'll be happy if we get that one." I said, but inside I was jumping with excitement. "Ok." My mom agreed. I couldn't believe it we were probably going to get a huge computer with a touch screen!!!!!! 

Here is my AHW

"Let's go to the mall." my dad said. "Ooo, what for? I asked. "Since the old computer broke, we have to look for a new computer." He answered. "Fine with me." my mom sighed. As we got into the car we started talking about what computer we each wanted. "I want a PC, for sure." my mom said with an air that plainly said she though she was right. "Well, I think we should get a Microsoft computer." My dad said with his voice that he used to get his way. "No, we should totally get a MacBook!" I told my parents  "No, definitely not." My parents said together. "Why can't we have a MacBook?" I asked. "Because it costs to much and is too small." My parents answered. After this conversation ended, my dad pulled up into the parking lot. "Hurry, hurry." my mom said while rushing us. "We walked into the huge red, green, blue, and yellow Microsoft store. My mom and I started looking around and found a small tablet. We sat down to look and play with it. My dad found a worker whose name was Joseph. "Hello, how can I help you." Joseph asked. "Hello, well I'm looking for a new computer." My dad told him. "Oh, well do you want a touchscreen, or just a mouse computer?" he asked. "Ohhhh, you guys have touchscreens? I didn't know that!" My dad exclaimed. "Oh, yes of course we do." Joseph said. "Okay, I'd like to see them." he replied. "Well right this way." came the answer. My mom and I headed towards the tablets. "Come on guys." My dad called. "Uggggg." I groaned. "Why can't we look at the MacBook's?" I sighed. "After this." came the reply. 10 minutes later we finally went to the Apple store. "OK, I'm going to look at the IPads." my mom said. "Kay, we're going to look at the computers." my dad answered. "OK." Siad my mom. While we were looking at the computers my dad seemed like he wanted the Microsoft computer more. "Papa, you really can't be leaning towards the Microsoft computer, can you?" I asked. "Why not, and yes I am." he said. "But-but the Apple computer is sooooo much better!" I exclaimed. "We'll see, right now it's time to go home."

The next day.

"Shin Be, we're going back to the Microsoft store because we might, 'might' get the computer. "Well, I still want a computer so I'll be happy if we get that one." I said, but inside I was jumping with excitement.

My AHW

My new computer can do sooooo many things and there's not 1 thing that I can find that my computer can't do. I still have yet to find something my computer can't do.

My AHW

My new computer can do sooooo many things and there's not 1 thing that I can find that my computer can't do. I still have yet to find something my computer can't do.

My AHW

"Let's go to the mall." my dad said. "Ooo, what for? I asked. "Since the old computer broke, we have to look for a new computer." He answered. "Fine with me." my mom sighed. As we got into the car we started talking about what computer we each wanted. "I want a PC, for sure." my mom said with an air that plainly said she though she was right. "Well, I think we should get a Microsoft computer." My dad said with his voice that he used to get his way. "No, we should totally get a MacBook!" I told my parents  "No, definitely not." My parents said together. "Why can't we have a MacBook?" I asked. "Because it costs to much and is too small." My parents answered. After this conversation ended, my dad pulled up into the parking lot. "Hurry, hurry." my mom said while rushing us. "We walked into the huge red, green, blue, and yellow Microsoft store. My mom and I started looking around and found a small tablet. We sat down to look and play with it. My dad found a worker whose name was Joseph. "Hello, how can I help you." Joseph asked. "Hello, well I'm looking for a new computer." My dad told him. "Oh, well do you want a touchscreen, or just a mouse computer?" he asked. "Ohhhh, you guys have touchscreens? I didn't know that!" My dad exclaimed. "Oh, yes of course we do." Joseph said. "Okay, I'd like to see them." he replied. "Well right this way." came the answer. My mom and I headed towards the tablets. "Come on guys." My dad called. "Uggggg." I groaned. "Why can't we look at the MacBook's?" I sighed. "After this." came the reply. 10 minutes later we finally went to the Apple store. "OK, I'm going to look at the IPads." my mom said. "Kay, we're going to look at the computers." my dad answered. "OK." Siad my mom. While we were looking at the computers my dad seemed like he wanted the Microsoft computer more. "Papa, you really can't be leaning towards the Microsoft computer, can you?" I asked. "Why not, and yes I am." he said.

Here is my Criterion essay

Reading is something where you can learn things or you can take adventures to places you never been. It helps you learn things and you can go your own pace, because some people think their class goes to faster slow. If you don't like informational books than you can read fiction books. Those books can take you places you've never imagined. Sometimes you learn more from books than you sometimes do in class. Most times when you sit down and your mom tells you that its time to eat. You would think you only read for 10 minutes, but you read for 1 hour! Sometimes you will come across a book that you think is boring, or is bad. You don't need to stop reading, just find your topic that you like the most! Almost everyone who picks up a book ends up liking books! That's what reading is and how its fun!

Notes

Part 1

1. Why did they have to check the slaves?
2. Why did they only take one family member?
3. Why did they take the kids?
4. Why are some masters really nice to their slaves?
5. What is a body servant?

Part 2

6. How were the jobs that the girls do different from the jobs boys do?
7. What kind of punishments did slaves get?
8. What is most amount of slaves that people could have?
9. Why couldn't a slave go to school?

Part 3


10.  Why were only some of the slaves standing up to their master?
11. If a slave had a baby who would it belong to?
12. What kind of rules are used to keep slaves?
13. What would happen if a slave got sick?


Part 4

14. Why do some slaves actullay like their masters?
15. Were all slaves african?
16. Were all slaves treated terrible?