Saturday, January 31, 2015

Antipode



~The Antipode~

 

 

 

 

 

Part 1:

 The orange, pink and yellow glow of the sun was rising in the west on the planet Restome. Many things there are antipode of Earth. The people there know nothing of other worlds but the life they live. Their civilization is incredibly more advanced than Earth. For example, they never have any wars and, they can control the wind and weather with just a push of a button. The weather machine consisted of steps and things so evolved that the Earthlings have never even dreamed of it. In Restome there are huge houses and even the 'poor' live in the huge houses. The poor people in Restome are considered rich on Earth. They also have so many materials everything is bountiful.  They're rich in water, oil, precious stones and other materials.

 

 Its winter now and very hot, at the temperature of 101 degrees Fahrenheit. In one neighborhood there is a small 10 year old girl who is waiting at a public flying train station with her mom. They're in the rich class and the young girl wears shorts with sparkling gold, diamonds and emeralds. Her earrings and jewelry are diamonds and emeralds. She wears a sparkling shirt of emeralds and rich silk and her flip flops are sliver inlaid with tiny alexandrite chips each weighing less than 0.1 of an ounce. Her name is Sarani which means joy and she really does bring joy to her mother. She brings joy because she always gets A's in school, and always helps her mom when necessary.  Her mother's name is Remeleen, and that means white antelope. Sarani always writes down that name, always asks why her mom doesn't like the name Remeleem. Her mother always replies, 'I'm not an antelope, I'm not graceful, and I don't like people calling me what I'm not, such as 'white antelope'.

 

 Part 2:

 

 Sarani Smith and her mother were waiting to go visit Sarani's grandmother who is even wealthier than her mom. She loves seeing her grandmother because she is the only grandparent she has left. She doesn't even have a dad (if she does she never saw him) so when people bring it up she feels a pain deep in her like someone stabbed a knife through her heart, or like a shard of ice that flash freezes when anyone brings the subject of dads up. Her grandmother always hugs and kisses Sarani and feels like she has to buy Sarani's affection. She gives her things such as clothes, jewels and money. Sarani refuses it all. She hates how her grandma thinks that Sarani is shallow enough to love her just because she gives her presents. She loves her grandma anyways-without the gifts.

 

 Part 3:

 

 A few blocks down from Sarani's grandma's house was another 10 year old girl whose name was Rosaline Appleseed. When she was young she didn't like her name but as she got older, her love for her name grew. Rosaline lives with her dad and dog named Buddy, in a gigantic mansion. Rosaline also gets all A's and gets highest marks in school. She doesn't need to help clean the house because she has machines to do all the work but always does everything she's told. She loves her dad, whose name is Johnny Appleseed. Rosaline's dad got rich for growing apple trees, that's why his name is Johnny Appleseed. Rosaline is standing outside waiting to go visit Johnny's dad. Rosa is wearing an Italian silk blouse with diamonds and sapphires. She's also wearing a diamond necklace, bracelet and earrings. Her shorts have sapphires in the hem of the shorts. Her dad is so rich that they have their very own private flying train.

Part 4:

 

Rosaline’s grandfather owns 3 dogs so Rosa always bring Buddy to his house so Buddy can play with the other dogs. Even though Rosa has Buddy and tons of friends, she always wanted a sibling. A twin to be exact. Rosa also wants a mom because she wants her dad’s face light up like a light bulb like he used to in the pictures. Once in a while Rosa’s dad smiles but not often. Now the train comes, sleek and elegant for such a large thing. The purring of the train is comforting.

“Let’s go. Do you have your bag?”

“Yes, papa.”


Rosa and her dad always stay for a week or two at her grandfather’s house since he’s lonely and very nice. He always takes the time to ask Rosa how she’s doing at home and in school. She really likes her grandfather but feels a pity that her grandmother died. But it brings Rosa and her grandfather closer together because they both live without someone they both need and want. Rosa’s mother and her grandfather’s wife. But they both deal with it and their dogs help because dogs are very energetic and playful so they help you keep calm and happy.
 
 

 

 

 

Friday, January 30, 2015

Literary Essay Draft 3





Going to school and making friends
is hard, doing it with a facial deformity is harder. In the book Wonder by R.J.
Palacio, Auggie overcomes the challenge of going to school with a facial
deformity. He’s brave just to try to go to school but getting thorugh a whole
is really brave. Some people think that its easy to make friends but it takes
more than going to school to make friends. It takes a wonder to that. Most
people think that's it's not that hard, but I think that it takes a lot of
bravery. I think Auggie is a wonder for being that brave.  (7)



At
the beginning of the story it gives evidence that Auggie is a wonder because
Auggie has two friends and that's an accomplishment to makes friends especially
with a facial deformity. At the beginning not many people were nice to him,
they gave him mean looks and wispered about him. 
For
example all those people felt 'horrified. Sickened. Scared.' One girl sticks up
for him and sits with him at lunch. Her name is summer and she tells the girls
who are bullying him and laughing at him to stop it. Jack also sticks up for
him when Julian calls him mean names and bullys him. This shows that he has
really good friends and he really is a wonder for making friends that stick up for
you.
(7)



His
friends stick up for each other, and are really nice to him and treat him like
a normal kid. Like Justin "Yo, don't mess with Auggie." He said that
becuase some kids were bullying him and he stuck up for him. That's what real
friends are even though he's older than Auggie. They all became used to him and
became nice to him. Like this girl Maya who used to not talk to him and now is
nice to him. She gave Auggie a keychain that says 'to the nicest Auggie Doll in
the world.' So people are being nice to him which shows Auggie is a wonder
becuase he can have so many people being nice to him. That's accomplishmement
even without a different face. 
(9)



Auggie
is a wonder becuase he can change the way people feel and think about him.
"I am very pleased to award The Henry Ward Beecher medal to the student
whose quiet strength has carried up 
to the most hearts. So will
August Pullman please come up here to receive this medal?" Auggie changed
everyones perspective on him and how to judge people. I think it's a great
accomplishment for him to get through 5th grade and to have everyone friends
with you and nice to you. His mom is really proud of him. "Thank you
Auggie."

"For
what?"


"For
everything you've given us," she said. "For coming into our lives.
For being you." You really are a wonder, Auggie. You are a wonder."


Auggie
is a real wonder becuase he changed the way his parents look at him and he
changed the way everyone at school thought about him. I think that's a huge
accomplishment to change the way even you're parents look at you. Auggies mom
thinks that he's a wonder and so do I for being so brave to get though 5th
grade. 
(11)





Now
as I think about it everyone is a wonder no matter who they are.  Some people will feel pity towards Auggie,
but you shouldn’t feel pity towards the person. You shouldn’t feel pity you should
instead think about how brave they are and how you can be you just as brave. You
can be a wonder no matter who you are just by being kind. In my life there are
so many people changing other people’s life and that’s what I think being a
wonder is.

Thursday, January 29, 2015

Appleseeds

Part 1:
The orange, pink and yellow glow of the sun was rising in the west on the planet Restome. Many things there are antipode of Earth. The people there know nothing of other worlds but the life they live. Their civilization is incredibly more advanced than Earth. For example, they never have any wars and, they can control the wind and weather with just a push of a button. The weather machine consisted of steps and things so evolved that the Earthlings have never even dreamed of it. In Restome there are huge houses and even the 'poor' live in the huge houses. The poor people in Restome are considered rich on Earth. They also  have so many materials everything is bountiful.  They're rich in water, oil, precious stones and other materials.

Its winter now and very hot, at the temperature of 101 degrees Fahrenheit. In one neighborhood  there is a small 10 year old girl who is waiting at a public flying train station with her mom. They're in the rich class and the young girl wears shorts with sparkling gold, diamonds and emeralds. Her earrings and jewelry are diamonds and emeralds. She wears a sparkling shirt of emeralds and rich silk and her flip flops are sliver inlaid with tiny alexandrite chips each  weighing less than 0.1 of an ounce. Her name is Sarani which means joy and she really does bring joy to her mother. She brings joy because she always gets A''s in school, and always helps her mom when necessary.  Her mother's name is Remeleen, and that means white antelope. Sarani always writes down that name, always asks why her mom doesn't like the name Remeleem. Her mother always replies, 'I'm not an antelope, I'm not graceful, and I don't like people calling me what I'm not, such as 'white antelope'.

Part 2:

Sarani Smith and her mother were waiting to go visit Sarani's grandmother who is even wealthier than her mom. She loves seeing her grandmother because she is the only grandparent she has left. She doesn't even have a dad (if she does she never saw him) so when people bring it up she feels a pain deep in her like someone stabbed a knife through her heart, or like a shard of ice that flash freezes when anyone brings the subject of dads up. Her grandmother always hugs and kisses Sarani and feels like she has to buy Sarani's affection. She gives her things such as clothes, jewels and money. Sarani refuses it all. She hates how her grandma thinks that Sarani is shallow enough to love her just because she gives her presents. She loves her grandma anyways-without the gifts.

Part 3:

A few blocks down from Sarani's grandma's house was another 10 year old girl whose name was Rosaline Appleseed. When she was young she didn't like her name but as she got older, her love for her name grew. Rosaline lives with her dad in a gigantic mansion and Rosaline also gets all A's and gets highest marks in school. She doesn't need to help clean the house because she has machines to do all the work but always does everything she's told. She loves her dad, whose name is Johnny Appleseed. Rosaline's dad got rich for growing apple trees, that's why his name is Johnny Appleseed. Rosaline is standing outside waiting to go visit Johnny's dad. Rosa is wearing a Italian silk blouse with diamonds and sapphires. She's also wearing a diamond necklace, bracelet and earrings. Her shorts have sapphires in the hem of the shorts. Her dad is so rich that they have their very own private flying train.  
  

Wednesday, January 28, 2015

AHW

Today I watched the play Secusical right after choice hour. I was also selling jewlery right outside the cafeteria. Jordyn was very kind as to give me a free ticket, they were having a sale of buy one get one free. I stood out in the hall waiting for people to come to our stand. Now it's hard for people to concentrate when there's food right across from you so not many people bout stuff in the beginning. So I sat and watched the play with Megan, and Jordyn. I really liked it even though they sung a lot but that's what a musical is. Almost at the end I went in the hall to clean up and this one girl bought $10 worth of jewlery. Then I had to leave but I had a good time!

Wonder Literary Essay

Going to school and making friends is hard, doing it with a facial deformity is harder.  In the book Wonder by R.J. Palacio, Auggie overcomes the challenge of going to school with a facial deformity. Most people think that's it's not that hard but I think that it takes a lot of bravery and I think Auggie is a wonder for being that brave. 

At the beginning of the story it gives evidence that Auggie is a wonder because Auggie has two friends and that's an accomplishment to makes friends especially with a facial deformity. At the beginning not many people were nice to him, they gave him mean looks and wispered about him. 
For example all those people felt 'horrified. Sickened. Scared.' One girl sticks up for him and sits with him at lunch. Her name is summer and she tells the girls who are bullying him and laughing at him to stop it. Jack also sticks up for him when Julian calls him mean names and bullys him. This shows that he has really good friends and he really is a wonder for making friends that stick up for you.

His friends stick up for each other, and are really nice to him and treat him like a normal kid. Like Justin "Yo, don't mess with Auggie." He said that becuase some kids were bullying him and he stuck up for him. That's what real friends are even though he's older than Auggie. They all became used to him and became nice to him. Like this girl Maya who used to not talk to him and now is nice to him. She gave Auggie a keychain that says 'to the nicest Auggie Doll in the world.' So people are being nice to him which shows Auggie is a wonder becuase he can have so many people being nice to him. That's accomplishmement even without a different face. 

Auggie is a wonder becuase he can change the way people feel and think about him. "I am very pleased to award. The Henry Ward Beecher medal to the student whose quiet strength has carried up 
to the most hearts. So will August Pullman please come up here to receive this medal?" Auggie
changed everyones perspective on him and how to judge people. I think it's a great accomplishment for him to get through 5th grade and to have everyone friends with you and nice to you. His mom is really proud if him. "Thank you Auggie." she answered softly. For everything. For coming into our lives, for being you. You reall are a wonder Auggie. You are a wonder.
"For what?"
"For everything you've given us," she said. "For coming into our lives. For being you." You really are a wonder, Auggie. You are a wonder."
Auggie is a real wonder becuase he changed the way his parents look at him and he changed the way everyone at school thought about him. I think that's a huge accomplishment to change the way even you're parents look at you. Auggies mom thinks that he's a wonder and so do I for being so brave to get though 5th grade. 


That's why I think Auggie is a wonder-for changing so many lives. He's been so brave and he made so many friends. I think that's the bravest kind of bravery.

Tuesday, January 27, 2015

AHW

Yesterday I was sitting in a hard plastic chair in the weird smelling orthodontists office. Now I like my orthodontist just not what she does to my teeth. Yesterday she had to tighten my right side of braces. She also had a super tight band of color. It hurts so 
bad! I can't even chew a steamed potato on my right side. But I can chew chips on my left side. The pain is unmanageable (sometimes) and sometimes I wish I didn't have braces.

Monday, January 26, 2015

Restome

Part 1:
The orange, pink and yellow glow of the sun was rising in the west on the planet Restome. Many things there are antipode of Earth. The people there know nothing of other worlds but the life they live. Their civilization is incredibly more advanced than Earth. For example, they never have any wars and, they can control the wind and weather with just a push of a button. The weather machine consisted of steps and things so evolved that the Earthlings have never even dreamed of it. In Restome there are huge houses and even the 'poor' live in the huge houses. The poor people in Restome are considered rich on Earth. They also  have so many materials everything is bountiful.  They're rich in water, oil, precious stones and other materials.

Its winter now and very hot, at the temperature of 101 degrees Fahrenheit. In one neighborhood  there is a small 10 year old girl who is waiting at a public flying train station with her mom. They're in the rich class and the young girl wears shorts with sparkling gold, diamonds and emeralds. Her earrings and jewelry are diamonds and emeralds. She wears a sparkling shirt of emeralds and rich silk and her flip flops are sliver inlaid with tiny alexandrite chips each  weighing less than 0.1 of an ounce. Her name is Sarani which means joy and she really does bring joy to her mother. Her mother's name is Remeleen, and that means white antelope. Sarani always writes down that name, always asks why her mom doesn't like the name Remeleem. Her mother always replies, 'I'm not an antelope, I'm not graceful, and I don't like people calling me what I'm not, such as 'white antelope'.

Part 2:

Sarani and her mother were waiting to go visit Sarani's grandmother who is even wealthier than her mom. She loves seeing her grandmother because she is the only grandparent she has left. She doesn't even have a dad so when people bring it up she feels a pain deep in her like someone stabbed a knife through her heart, or like a shard of ice that flash freezes when anyone brings the subject of dads up. Her grandmother always hugs and kisses Sarani and feels like she has to buy Sarani's affection. She gives her things such as clothes, jewels and money. Sarani refuses it all. She hates how her grandma thinks that Sarani is shallow enough to love her just because she gives her presents. She loves her grandma anyways-without the gifts.