Trick and Treat

"Thank You" I replied. "Your very welcome" Said the very old lady that lived across the street. She just gave 2, not 1 but 2 king sized candy bars! "Score!" I exclaimed to my friend Sally as we walked down the sidewalk. "Whoa, Emily nice going!" Sally said. "Watch out for the headless ghost" I cautioned to Sally." "What headless ghost?" She stammered. "Oh didn't you know? Okay, I'll tell you the story myself." Then Emily snapped her fingers and she began. Once upon a time there was a very nice young man-" "What is it?" I asked Sally. "Can't we at least sit down?" she asked. "Fine." Emily sighed and she waved her hand and 2 comfy chairs appeared. "So, there was a very nice young man but he had a short temper. One day his one love showed up and stated teasing him with hurtful words. Then she began to throw things at him like a knife and a table. He told her to stop but she kept doing it. He got so mad he took the knife and stabbed her with it. Seeing what he done he took the knife her stabbed her with he tried to stab himself with it. But then he heard a voice telling him "Don't do it, take your revenge on other girls like her, don't kill yourself." "Okay, great idea!" Now, every year he finds a blonde haired girl who doesn't believe the story and kills her. Then he eats her flesh!" "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" Screamed Sally looking at her amazingly curly blonde hair. "Ha, Ha, Ha." laughed Emily. "What's so funny?" asked Sally. "Didn't you know?" "Know what?" Sally curiously. "I just made up the whole story!" "Yeah right, now if you don't mind I'm going to hide at my house!" "OK, have fun!" laughed Emily. Now I know what your thinking. That Emily is super duper mean to trick her friend like that, but that wasn't Emily! That was the boy who want's his revenge whose name is Bob, dressed up as Emily. He purposely hurt Emily so that he could take her place. But Sally and the real Emily also have magic powers like Bob has. Now read ahead to see what happens. Now Sally screamed all the way home and when she got there she saw Emily, mind you the real one. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! she yelled at the top of her lungs." "What?" Emily asked. "This happened and she told her the whole story. "Whoa, that's just freaky." "I promise I was here he whole time." "Good" replied Sally. "Now let's come up with a plan to stop Bob once and for all!" Emily and Sally yelled together. They put their heads together and quickly came up with a plan. "Wait, I read in a magic book that if you have one set of best friends, check, one or two diamond or gold coasters, check, then you either break them into two pieces, mind you jadedly, or keep them whole. When you break them into two pieces each one of us will have a piece. Then we'll keep them until the time comes and we'll put them together and we'll have more power than you can imagine." Emily said in hushed tones. "Cool, let's do it." shouted Sally. "OK, but first the book says to rub cherry red lip gloss with flecks of gold on our hands, they said it would protect us from the harmful rays." Said Emily hurriedly. They quickly broke the pieces so they fit like a puzzle. Sally tried to put them together but it didn't work. "See I told you this is a terrible idea." Growled Sally. "That's because it only works when you absolutely need it and both of the friends have to be holding a piece." Said Emily in a soothing tone. "Let's bring grandma's book of spells!" Exclaimed Sally. "Great idea." said Sally. They hunted through the book of spells to find any useful spells. We found in the book that because Bob turned so evil, holy water will burn Bob badly. "Great, all we have to do is go to a church where they'll be sure to give you 2 gallons of holy water for free." said Sally, her voice dripping with sarcasm. "Why not sneak into the church and take all the holy water they have?" asked Emily, with the voice she always had when her plan worked and other people's plan backfired. "First we have to keep the stone pieces safe so lets each keep one half of it." said Sally in a 'matter of fact' voice. "Ok, but lets wrap it in gold tissue paper." said Emily her voice covered in fake, sugary happiness. "We're not rich here." Growled Sally. "Oops." murmured Emily. They then got there magic wands ready then apparated (that means traveled somewhere in a blink of an eye) to Jack's house. "Hey, Bob come out here so we can give you a piece of our minds or are you too scared?" "Well, come out here or are you a chicken?" "Baaaaaak, Baaaaaaaaak!" taunted Emily. "SHH, Bob might hear you." whispered Sally. "Oh, but she doesn't need to." Just then there was blinding flash of light then the fearsome Jack appeared. "Don't worry, I think I eat both of you." snarled Bob. "Now!" screamed Emily.  Then at the same time they pulled out their pieces of diamond coasters and put them together while they waited for something to happen. At the same time a small golden retriever scampered up to them. "Hello, I see you want to destroy Bob." said the golden retriever whose name was Charlotte. "Where are you?" asked Sally in a frightened voice. "Don't worry." said Charlotte, "I'm right here." and she told them all about the evil Bob and how she got turned into a dog. "The only way you can make that coaster work is with my help." said Charlotte.  "Please, please, help us!" cried Sally. "OK, ok. First thing you need to do is lure Bob into a place of happiness and kindness." said Charlotte. "Charlotte, please just tell us the answers." moaned Sally getting freaked out. "Oh, call me Lotte, and sorry but you guys have to figure it out yourselves. yipped Lotte. "Wait, I know, its a church!" exclaimed Emily. "Good Job." squeaked Lotte. Now Emily, Sally, and Lotte came up with a plan. Sally moved out into the open where Bob could see her and she screamed, "Hey, Bob if you want to eat me than you have to catch me!" she quickly apparated with Emily and Lotte to the nearest church. "Ha, ha, you think you're faster than me?" sneered Bob. "Maybe I do." said Sally in a brave voice. She stepped into the church and Bob stepped in too. Emily and Lotte quickly stepped in and closed the door behind them. "Do you know where you are?" Emily asked a fake scared voice. "Oops, I guess we're in a church." said Sally. "Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, it can't be!" sobbed Bob. Then Emily and Sally each pulled out their coaster and put it together and pointed it at Bob when Lotte said "Wait, when I said you need my help you do. Point it at me first, I was a talented sorceress myself. I'll lend you some of my magic to help." "OK." agreed Emily. Together they pointed it at Lotte. There was a blinding flash of light, then a beautiful girl appeared out of the bluish mist. "You're L-L-Lotte?"

Trick and Treat

"Thank You" I replied. "Your very welcome" Said the very old lady that lived across the street. She just gave 2, not 1 but 2 king sized candy bars! "Score!" I exclaimed to my friend Sally as we walked down the sidewalk. "Whoa, Emily nice going!" Sally said. "Watch out for the headless ghost" I cautioned to Sally." "What headless ghost?" She stammered. "Oh didn't you know? Okay, I'll tell you the story myself." Then Emily snapped her fingers and she began. Once upon a time there was a very nice young man-" "What is it?" I asked Sally. "Can't we at least sit down?" she asked. "Fine." Emily sighed and she waved her hand and 2 comfy chairs appeared. "So, there was a very nice young man but he had a short temper. One day his one love showed up and stated teasing him with hurtful words. Then she began to throw things at him like a knife and a table. He told her to stop but she kept doing it. He got so mad he took the knife and stabbed her with it. Seeing what he done he took the knife her stabbed her with he tried to stab himself with it. But then he heard a voice telling him "Don't do it, take your revenge on other girls like her, don't kill yourself." "Okay, great idea!" Now, every year he finds a blonde haired girl who doesn't believe the story and kills her. Then he eats her flesh!" "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" Screamed Sally looking at her amazingly curly blonde hair. "Ha, Ha, Ha." laughed Emily. "What's so funny?" asked Sally. "Didn't you know?" "Know what?" Sally curiously. "I just made up the whole story!" "Yeah right, now if you don't mind I'm going to hide at my house!" "OK, have fun!" laughed Emily. Now I know what your thinking. That Emily is super duper mean to trick her friend like that, but that wasn't Emily! That was the boy who want's his revenge whose name is Bob, dressed up as Emily. He purposely hurt Emily so that he could take her place. But Sally and the real Emily also have magic powers like Bob has. Now read ahead to see what happens. Now Sally screamed all the way home and when she got there she saw Emily, mind you the real one. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! she yelled at the top of her lungs." "What?" Emily asked. "This happened and she told her the whole story. "Whoa, that's just freaky." "I promise I was here he whole time." "Good" replied Sally. "Now let's come up with a plan to stop Bob once and for all!" Emily and Sally yelled together. They put their heads together and quickly came up with a plan. "Wait, I read in a magic book that if you have one set of best friends, check, one or two diamond or gold coasters, check, then you either break them into two pieces, mind you jadedly, or keep them whole. When you break them into two pieces each one of us will have a piece. Then we'll keep them until the time comes and we'll put them together and we'll have more power than you can imagine." Emily said in hushed tones. "Cool, let's do it." shouted Sally. "OK, but first the book says to rub cherry red lip gloss with flecks of gold on our hands, they said it would protect us from the harmful rays." Said Emily hurriedly. They quickly broke the pieces so they fit like a puzzle. Sally tried to put them together but it didn't work. "See I told you this is a terrible idea." Growled Sally. "That's because it only works when you absolutely need it and both of the friends have to be holding a piece." Said Emily in a soothing tone. "Let's bring grandma's book of spells!" Exclaimed Sally. "Great idea." said Sally. They hunted through the book of spells to find any useful spells. We found in the book that because Bob turned so evil, holy water will burn Bob badly. "Great, all we have to do is go to a church where they'll be sure to give you 2 gallons of holy water for free." said Sally, her voice dripping with sarcasm. "Why not sneak into the church and take all the holy water they have?" asked Emily, with the voice she always had when her plan worked and other people's plan backfired. "First we have to keep the stone pieces safe so lets each keep one half of it." said Sally in a 'matter of fact' voice. "Ok, but lets wrap it in gold tissue paper." said Emily her voice covered in fake, sugary happiness. "We're not rich here." Growled Sally. "Oops." murmured Emily. They then got there magic wands ready then apparated (that means traveled somewhere in a blink of an eye) to Jack's house. "Hey, Bob come out here so we can give you a piece of our minds or are you too scared?" "Well, come out here or are you a chicken?" "Baaaaaak, Baaaaaaaaak!" taunted Emily. "SHH, Bob might hear you." whispered Sally. "Oh, but she doesn't need to." Just then there was blinding flash of light then the fearsome Jack appeared. "Don't worry, I think I eat both of you." snarled Bob. "Now!" screamed Emily.  Then at the same time they pulled out their pieces of diamond coasters and put them together while they waited for something to happen. At the same time a small golden retriever scampered up to them. "Hello, I see you want to destroy Bob." said the golden retriever whose name was Charlotte. "Where are you?" asked Sally in a frightened voice. "Don't worry." said Charlotte, "I'm right here." and she told them all about the evil Bob and how she got turned into a dog. "The only way you can make that coaster work is with my help." said Charlotte.  "Please, please, help us!" cried Sally. "OK, ok. First thing you need to do is lure Bob into a place of happiness and kindness." said Charlotte. "Charlotte, please just tell us the answers." moaned Sally getting freaked out. "Oh, call me Lotte, and sorry but you guys have to figure it out yourselves. yipped Lotte. "Wait, I know, its a church!" exclaimed Emily. "Good Job." squeaked Lotte. Now Emily, Sally, and Lotte came up with a plan. Sally moved out into the open where Bob could see her and she screamed, "Hey, Bob if you want to eat me than you have to catch me!" she quickly apparated with Emily and Lotte to the nearest church. "Ha, ha, you think you're faster than me?" sneered Bob. "Maybe I do." said Sally in a brave voice. She stepped into the church and Bob stepped in too.

Trick and Treat

 "Thank You" I replied. "Your very welcome" Said the very old lady that lived across the street. She just gave 2, not 1 but 2 king sized candy bars! "Score!" I exclaimed to my friend Sally as we walked down the sidewalk. "Whoa, Emily nice going!" Sally said. "Watch out for the headless ghost" I cautioned to Sally." "What headless ghost?" She stammered. "Oh didn't you know? Okay, I'll tell you the story myself." Then Emily snapped her fingers and she began. Once upon a time there was a very nice young man-" "What is it?" I asked Sally. "Can't we at least sit down?" she asked. "Fine." Emily sighed and she waved her hand and 2 comfy chairs appeared. "So, there was a very nice young man but he had a short temper. One day his one love showed up and stated teasing him with hurtful words. Then she began to throw things at him like a knife and a table. He told her to stop but she kept doing it. He got so mad he took the knife and stabbed her with it. Seeing what he done he took the knife her stabbed her with he tried to stab himself with it. But then he heard a voice telling him "Don't do it, take your revenge on other girls like her, don't kill yourself." "Okay, great idea!" Now, every year he finds a blonde haired girl who doesn't believe the story and kills her. Then he eats her flesh!" "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" Screamed Sally looking at her amazingly curly blonde hair. "Ha, Ha, Ha." laughed Emily. "What's so funny?" asked Sally. "Didn't you know?" "Know what?" Sally curiously. "I just made up the whole story!" "Yeah right, now if you don't mind I'm going to hide at my house!" "OK, have fun!" laughed Emily. Now I know what your thinking. That Emily is super duper mean to trick her friend like that, but that wasn't Emily! That was the boy who want's his revenge whose name is Bob, dressed up as Emily. He purposely hurt Emily so that he could take her place. But Sally and the real Emily also have magic powers like Bob has. Now read ahead to see what happens. Now Sally screamed all the way home and when she got there she saw Emily, mind you the real one. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! she yelled at the top of her lungs." "What?" Emily asked. "This happened and she told her the whole story. "Whoa, that's just freaky." "I promise I was here he whole time." "Good" replied Sally. "Now let's come up with a plan to stop Bob once and for all!" Emily and Sally yelled together. They put their heads together and quickly came up with a plan. "Wait, I read in a magic book that if you have one set of best friends, check, one or two diamond or gold coasters, check, then you either break them into two pieces, mind you jadedly, or keep them whole. When you break them into two pieces each one of us will have a piece. Then we'll keep them until the time comes and we'll put them together and we'll have more power than you can imagine." Emily said in hushed tones. "Cool, let's do it." shouted Sally. "OK, but first the book says to rub cherry red lip gloss with flecks of gold on our hands, they said it would protect us from the harmful rays." Said Emily hurriedly. They quickly broke the pieces so they fit like a puzzle. Sally tried to put them together but it didn't work. "See I told you this is a terrible idea." Growled Sally. "That's because it only works when you absolutely need it and both of the friends have to be holding a piece." Said Emily in a soothing tone. "Let's bring grandma's book of spells!" Exclaimed Sally. "Great idea." said Sally. They hunted through the book of spells to find any useful spells. We found in the book that because Bob turned so evil, holy water will burn Bob badly. "Great, all we have to do is go to a church where they'll be sure to give you 2 gallons of holy water for free." said Sally, her voice dripping with sarcasm. "Why not sneak into the church and take all the holy water they have?" asked Emily, with the voice she always had when her plan worked and other people's plan backfired. "First we have to keep the stone pieces safe so lets each keep one half of it." said Sally in a 'matter of fact' voice. "Ok, but lets wrap it in gold tissue paper." said Emily her voice covered in fake, sugary happiness. "We're not rich here." Growled Sally. "Oops." murmured Emily. They then got there magic wands ready then apparated (that means traveled somewhere in a blink of an eye) to Jack's house. "Hey, Bob come out here so we can give you a piece of our minds or are you too scared?" "Well, come out here or are you a chicken?" "Baaaaaak, Baaaaaaaaak!" taunted Emily. "SHH, Bob might hear you." whispered Sally. "Oh, but she doesn't need to." Just then there was blinding flash of light then the fearsome Jack appeared. "Don't worry, I think I eat both of you." snarled Bob. "Now!" screamed Emily.  Then at the same time they pulled out their pieces of diamond coasters and put them together while they waited for something to happen. At the same time a small golden retriever scampered up to them. "Hello, I see you want to destroy Bob." said the golden retriever whose name was Charlotte. "Where are you?" asked Sally in a frightened voice. "Don't worry." said Charlotte, "I'm right here." and she told them all about the evil Bob and how she got turned into a dog. "The only way you can make that coaster work is with my help." said Charlotte. 

Trick and Treat

 "Thank You" I replied. "Your very welcome" Said the very old lady that lived across the street. She just gave 2, not 1 but 2 king sized candy bars! "Score!" I exclaimed to my friend Sally as we walked down the sidewalk. "Whoa, Emily nice going!" Sally said. "Watch out for the headless ghost" I cautioned to Sally." "What headless ghost?" She stammered. "Oh didn't you know? Okay, I'll tell you the story myself." Then Emily snapped her fingers and she began. Once upon a time there was a very nice young man-" "What is it?" I asked Sally. "Can't we at least sit down?" she asked. "Fine." Emily sighed and she waved her hand and 2 comfy chairs appeared. "So, there was a very nice young man but he had a short temper. One day his one love showed up and stated teasing him with hurtful words. Then she began to throw things at him like a knife and a table. He told her to stop but she kept doing it. He got so mad he took the knife and stabbed her with it. Seeing what he done he took the knife her stabbed her with he tried to stab himself with it. But then he heard a voice telling him "Don't do it, take your revenge on other girls like her, don't kill yourself." "Okay, great idea!" Now, every year he finds a blonde haired girl who doesn't believe the story and kills her. Then he eats her flesh!" "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" Screamed Sally looking at her amazingly curly blonde hair. "Ha, Ha, Ha." laughed Emily. "What's so funny?" asked Sally. "Didn't you know?" "Know what?" Sally curiously. "I just made up the whole story!" "Yeah right, now if you don't mind I'm going to hide at my house!" "OK, have fun!" laughed Emily. Now I know what your thinking. That Emily is super duper mean to trick her friend like that, but that wasn't Emily! That was the boy who want's his revenge whose name is Jack, dressed up as Emily. He purposely hurt Emily so that he could take her place. But Sally and the real Emily also have magic powers like Jack has. Now read ahead to see what happens. Now Sally screamed all the way home and when she got there she saw Emily, mind you the real one. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! she yelled at the top of her lungs." "What?" Emily asked. "This happened and she told her the whole story. "Whoa, that's just freaky." "I promise I was here he whole time." "Good" replied Sally. "Now let's come up with a plan to stop Jack once and for all!" Emily and Sally yelled together. They put their heads together and quickly came up with a plan. "Wait, I read in a magic book that if you have one set of best friends, check, one or two diamond or gold coasters, check, then you either break them into two pieces, mind you jadedly, or keep them whole. When you break them into two pieces each one of us will have a piece. Then we'll keep them until the time comes and we'll put them together and we'll have more power than you can imagine." Emily said in hushed tones. "Cool, let's do it." shouted Sally. "OK, but first the book says to rub cherry red lip gloss on our hands, they said it would protect us from the harmful rays. "Said Emily hurriedly. They quickly broke the pieces so they fit like a puzzle. Sally tried to put them together but it didn't work. "See I told you this is a terrible idea." Growled Sally. "That's because it only works when you absolutely need it and both of the friends have to be holding a piece." Said Emily in a soothing tone. "Let's bring grandma's book of spells!" Exclaimed Sally. "Great idea." said Sally. They hunted through the book of spells to find any useful spells. We found in the book that because Jack turned so evil, holy water will burn Jack badly. "Great, all we have to do is go to a church where they'll be sure to give you 2 gallons of holy water for free." said Sally, her voice dripping with sarcasm. "Why not sneak into the church and take all the holy water they have?" asked Emily, with the voice she always had when her plan worked and other people's plan backfired. "First we have to keep the stone pieces safe so lets each keep one half of it." said Sally in a 'matter of fact' voice. "Ok, but lets wrap it in gold tissue paper." said Emily her voice covered in fake, sugary happiness. "We're not rich here." Growled Sally. "Oops." murmured Emily. They then got there magic wands ready then apparated (that means traveled somewhere in a blink of an eye) to Jack's house. "Hey, Jack come out here so we can give you a piece of our minds or are you too scared?" "Well, come out here or are you a chicken?" "Baaaaaak, Baaaaaaaaak!" taunted Emily. "SHH, Jack might hear you." whispered Sally. "Oh, but she doesn't need to." Just then there was blinding flash of light then the fearsome Jack appeared. "Don't worry, I think I eat both of you." snarled Jack. "Now!" screamed Emily.

Trick and Treat

 "Thank You" I replied. "Your very welcome" Said the very old lady that lived across the street. She just gave 2, not 1 but 2 king sized candy bars! "Score!" I exclaimed to my friend Sally as we walked down the sidewalk. "Whoa, Emily nice going!" Sally said. "Watch out for the headless ghost" I cautioned to Sally." "What headless ghost?" She stammered. "Oh didn't you know? Okay, I'll tell you the story myself." Then Emily snapped her fingers and she began. Once upon a time there was a very nice young man-" "What is it?" I asked Sally. "Can't we at least sit down?" she asked. "Fine." Emily sighed and she waved her hand and 2 comfy chairs appeared. "So, there was a very nice young man but he had a short temper. One day his one love showed up and stated teasing him with hurtful words. Then she began to throw things at him like a knife and a table. He told her to stop but she kept doing it. He got so mad he took the knife and stabbed her with it. Seeing what he done he took the knife her stabbed her with he tried to stab himself with it. But then he heard a voice telling him "Don't do it, take your revenge on other girls like her, don't kill yourself." "Okay, great idea!" Now, every year he finds a blonde haired girl who doesn't believe the story and kills her. Then he eats her flesh!" "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" Screamed Sally looking at her amazingly curly blonde hair. "Ha, Ha, Ha." laughed Emily. "What's so funny?" asked Sally. "Didn't you know?" "Know what?" Sally curiously. "I just made up the whole story!" "Yeah right, now if you don't mind I'm going to hide at my house!" "OK, have fun!" laughed Emily. Now I know what your thinking. That Emily is super duper mean to trick her friend like that, but that wasn't Emily! That was the boy who want's his revenge whose name is Jack, dressed up as Emily. He purposely hurt Emily so that he could take her place. But Sally and the real Emily also have magic powers like Jack has. Now read ahead to see what happens. Now Sally screamed all the way home and when she got there she saw Emily, mind you the real one. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! she yelled at the top of her lungs." "What?" Emily asked. "This happened and she told her the whole story. "Whoa, that's just freaky." "I promise I was here he whole time." "Good" replied Sally. "Now let's come up with a plan to stop Jack once and for all!" Emily and Sally yelled together. They put their heads together and quickly came up with a plan. "Wait, I read in a magic book that if you have one set of best friends, check, one or two diamond or gold coasters, check, then you either break them into two pieces, mind you jadedly, or keep them whole. When you break them into two pieces each one of us will have a piece. Then we'll keep them until the time comes and we'll put them together and we'll have more power than you can imagine." Emily said in hushed tones. "Cool, let's do it." shouted Sally. "OK, but first the book says to rub cherry red lip gloss on our hands, they said it would protect us from the harmful rays. "Said Emily hurriedly. They quickly broke the pieces so they fit like a puzzle. Sally tried to put them together but it didn't work. "See I told you this is a terrible idea." Growled Sally. "That's because it only works when you absolutely need it and both of the friends have to be holding a piece." Said Emily in a soothing tone. "Let's bring grandma's book of spells!" Exclaimed Sally. "Great idea." said Sally. They hunted through the book of spells to find any useful spells. We found in the book that because Jack turned so evil, holy water will burn Jack badly. "Great, all we have to do is go to a church where they'll be sure to give you 2 gallons of holy water for free." said Sally, her voice dripping with sarcasm. "Why not sneak into the church and take all the holy water they have?" asked Emily, with the voice she always had when her plan worked and other people's plan backfired. "First we have to keep the stone pieces safe so lets each keep one half of it." said Sally in a 'matter of fact' voice. "Ok, but lets wrap it in gold tissue paper." said Emily her voice covered in fake, sugary happiness. "We're not rich here." Growled Sally. "Oops." murmured Emily. They then got there magic wands ready then apparated (that means traveled somewhere in a blink of an eye) to Jack's house.

Trick and Treat

 "Thank You" I replied. "Your very welcome" Said the very old lady that lived across the street. She just gave 2, not 1 but 2 king sized candy bars! "Score!" I exclaimed to my friend Sally as we walked down the sidewalk. "Whoa, Emily nice going!" Sally said. "Watch out for the headless ghost" I cautioned to Sally." "What headless ghost?" She stammered. "Oh didn't you know? Okay, I'll tell you the story myself." Then Emily snapped her fingers and she began. Once upon a time there was a very nice young man-" "What is it?" I asked Sally. "Can't we at least sit down?" she asked. "Fine." Emily sighed and she waved her hand and 2 comfy chairs appeared. "So, there was a very nice young man but he had a short temper. One day his one love showed up and stated teasing him with hurtful words. Then she began to throw things at him like a knife and a table. He told her to stop but she kept doing it. He got so mad he took the knife and stabbed her with it. Seeing what he done he took the knife her stabbed her with he tried to stab himself with it. But then he heard a voice telling him "Don't do it, take your revenge on other girls like her, don't kill yourself." "Okay, great idea!" Now, every year he finds a blonde haired girl who doesn't believe the story and kills her. Then he eats her flesh!" "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" Screamed Sally looking at her amazingly curly blonde hair. "Ha, Ha, Ha." laughed Emily. "What's so funny?" asked Sally. "Didn't you know?" "Know what?" Sally curiously. "I just made up the whole story!" "Yeah right, now if you don't mind I'm going to hide at my house!" "OK, have fun!" laughed Emily. Now I know what your thinking. That Emily is super duper mean to trick her friend like that, but that wasn't Emily! That was the boy who want's his revenge whose name is Jack, dressed up as Emily. He purposely hurt Emily so that he could take her place. But Sally and the real Emily also have magic powers like Jack has. Now read ahead to see what happens. Now Sally screamed all the way home and when she got there she saw Emily, mind you the real one. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! she yelled at the top of her lungs." "What?" Emily asked. "This happened and she told her the whole story. "Whoa, that's just freaky." "I promise I was here he whole time." "Good" replied Sally. "Now let's come up with a plan to stop Jack once and for all!" Emily and Sally yelled together. They put their heads together and quickly came up with a plan. "Wait, I read in a magic book that if you have one set of best friends, check, one or two diamond or gold coasters, check, then you either break them into two pieces, mind you jadedly, or keep them whole. When you break them into two pieces each one of us will have a piece. Then we'll keep them until the time comes and we'll put them together and we'll have more power than you can imagine." Emily said in hushed tones. "Cool, let's do it." shouted Sally. "OK, but first the book says to rub cherry red lip gloss on our hands, they said it would protect us from the harmful rays. "Said Emily hurriedly. They quickly broke the pieces so they fit like a puzzle. Sally tried to put them together but it didn't work. "See I told you this is a terrible idea." Growled Sally. "That's because it only works when you absolutely need it and both of the friends have to be holding a piece." Said Emily in a soothing tone. "Let's bring grandma's book of spells!" Exclaimed Sally. "Great Idea."

Trick and Treat (Not so much the treat)

I forgot to post on Friday so here is my writing for Friday.
"Thank You" I replied. "Your very welcome" Said the very old lady that lived across the street. She just gave 2, not 1 but 2 king sized candy bars! "Score!" I exclaimed to my friend Sally as we walked down the sidewalk. "Whoa, Emily nice going!" Sally said. "Watch out for the headless ghost" I cautioned to Sally." "What headless ghost?" She stammered. "Oh didn't you know? Okay, I'll tell you the story myself." Then Emily snapped her fingers and she began. Once upon a time there was a very nice young man-" "What is it?" I asked Sally. "Can't we at least sit down?" she asked. "Fine." Emily sighed and she waved her hand and 2 comfy chairs appeared. "So, there was a very nice young man but he had a short temper. One day his one love showed up and stated teasing him with hurtful words. Then she began to throw things at him like a knife and a table. He told her to stop but she kept doing it. He got so mad he took the knife and stabbed her with it. Seeing what he done he took the knife her stabbed her with he tried to stab himself with it. But then he heard a voice telling him "Don't do it, take your revenge on other girls like her, don't kill yourself." "Okay, great idea!" Now every year he funds a blonde haired girl who doesn't believe the story and kills her. Then he eats her flesh!" "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" Screamed Sally looking at her amazingly curly blonde hair. "Ha, Ha, Ha." laughed Emily. "What's so funny?" asked Sally. "Didn't you know?" "Know what?" Sally curiously. "I just made up the whole story!" "Yeah right, now if you don't mind I'm going to hide at my house!" "OK, have fun!" laughed Emily. Now I know what your thinking. That Emily is super duper mean to trick her friend like that, but that wasn't Emily! That was the boy who want's his revenge whose name is Jack, dressed up as Emily. He purposely hurt Emily so that he could take her place. But Sally and the real Emily also have magic powers like Jack has. Now read ahead to see what happens. Now Sally screamed all the way home and when she got there she saw Emily, mind you the real one. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! she yelled at the top of her lungs." "What?" Emily asked. "This happened and she told her the whole story. "Whoa, that's just freaky." "I promise I was here he whole time." "Good" replied Sally. "Now let's come up with a plan to stop Jack once and for all!" Emily and Sally yelled together. They put their heads together and quickly came up with a plan. "Wait, I read in a magic book that if you have one set of best friends, check, one or two diamond or gold coasters, check, then you either break them into two pieces, mind you jadedly, or keep them whole. When you break them into two pieces each one of us will have a piece. Then we'll keep them until the time comes and we'll put them together and we'll have more power than you can imagine." Emily said in hushed tones. "Cool, let's do it." shouted Sally.

I forgot to post on Thursday so here is my writing for Thursday.
"Thank You" I replied. "Your very welcome" Said the very old lady that lived across the street. She just gave 2, not 1 but 2 king sized candy bars! "Score!" I exclaimed to my friend Sally as we walked down the sidewalk. "Whoa, Emily nice going!" Sally said. "Watch out for the headless ghost" I cautioned to Sally." "What headless ghost?" She stammered. "Oh didn't you know? Okay, I'll tell you the story myself." Then Emily snapped her fingers and she began. Once upon a time there was a very nice young man-" "What is it?" I asked Sally. "Can't we at least sit down?" she asked. "Fine." Emily sighed and she waved her hand and 2 comfy chairs appeared. "So, there was a very nice young man but he had a short temper. One day his one love showed up and stated teasing him with hurtful words. Then she began to throw things at him like a knife and a table. He told her to stop but she kept doing it. He got so mad he took the knife and stabbed her with it. Seeing what he done he took the knife her stabbed her with he tried to stab himself with it. But then he heard a voice telling him "Don't do it, take your revenge on other girls like her, don't kill yourself." "Okay, great idea!" Now every year he funds a blonde haired girl who doesn't believe the story and kills her. Then he eats her flesh!" "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" Screamed Sally looking at her amazingly curly blonde hair. "Ha, Ha, Ha." laughed Emily. "What's so funny?" asked Sally. "Didn't you know?" "Know what?" Sally curiously. "I just made up the whole story!" "Yeah right, now if you don't mind I'm going to hide at my house!" "OK, have fun!" laughed Emily. Now I know what your thinking. That Emily is super duper mean, but that wasn't Emily! That was the boy who want's his revenge, dressed up as Emily. He purposely hurt Emily so that he could take her place. But Sally and the real Emily also have magic powers like the boy has. Now read ahead to see what happens. Now Sally screamed all the way home and when she got there she saw Emily, mind you the real one. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! she yelled at the top of her lungs." "What?" Emily asked. "This happened and she told her the whole story.

Trick and Treat!

"Thank You" I replied. "Your very welcome" Said the very old lady that lived across the street. She just gave 2, not 1 but 2 king sized candy bars! "Score!" I exclaimed to my friend Sally as we walked down the sidewalk. "Whoa, Emily nice going!" Sally said. "Watch out for the headless ghost" I cautioned to Sally." "What headless ghost?" She stammered. "Oh didn't you know? Okay, I'll tell you the story myself." Then Emily snapped her fingers and she began. Once upon a time there was a very nice young man-" "What is it?" I asked Sally. "Can't we at least sit down?" she asked. "Fine." Emily sighed and she waved her hand and 2 comfy chairs appeared. "So, there was a very nice young man but he had a short temper. One day his one love showed up and stated teasing him with hurtful words. Then she began to throw things at him like a knife and a table. He told her to stop but she kept doing it. He got so mad he took the knife and stabbed her with it. Seeing what he done he took the knife her stabbed her with he tried to stab himself with it. But then he heard a voice telling him "Don't do it, take your revenge on other girls like her, don't kill yourself."

Halloween Scares

"Wake up, wake up" said a deep, but fuzzy voice. "Okay, Okay." I sleepily murmured. "Wait, What?", I shot up like I was being hit by a bullet. "Your not my mother." I shouted at the strange creature. "No I'm not" agreed the thing. "I'm your father!" "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" I screamed, then suddenly stopped realizing that it was just my father.

Once upon a time there were two best friends named Mim Be and Shia. They were both pretty and powerful princesses. They lived a mile from each other in huge white castles. They both had special super powers. Mim Be has an identic memory and Shia has super speed. They both have magic powers, but they could only use it for good. But one day an evil sorcerer came to town and her name was Shanna. She only had magic powers. But since everyone knew Shanna, she had to disguise herself as a poor peddler. As she hobbled into the castle Shia quickly called Mim Be and she said, "I heard from one of my magic apprentices that the evil Shanna has come to town and disguised herself as a poor peddler." I will come straight away to help you." Exclaimed Shia. "Okay thank you so much!" said Mim Be. Not one minute later Shia came walking in like the walk was only 1 foot and not one mile. Mim Be quickly chided herself and remembered that Shia had super speed. Then an apprentice yelled with his magically louder voice "Shanna is coming. I repeat, Shanna is coming. Everyone hide except for the magicians and the two princesses. By the way Shia, your magicians are also coming. Everyone prepare yourselves for battle! By the way apprentices, you will be fighting as well!" The whole time Mim Be and Shia were telling everyone to get the weapons, amour and supplies. The non-magic people would be helping the wounded and hungry. Not one minute later the evil Shanna came with her evil followers. (They were all magical people or evil creatures.)  The magicians of Shia and Mim Be started to murmur some words to start the war. "Wait, if we start the whole war it will be our fault so let them attack first!" shouted Mim Be. "Exactly right!" said Shia. "Attack!" screamed Shanna. Instantly 500 bad magicians started murmuring spells. (That isn't exactly good.) So Mim Be shouted over the noise "Defend our home!" They ran into the fight and started doing spells. Mim Be and Shia fought Shanna herself.  Mim Be slashed at Shanna while Shia whirled and shot spells at her. Shanna, the whole time was deflecting every single spell and was shooting numerous spells at them both. Then came a loud cry from the forest and Shanna screamed "Ha, the giants and the centaurs are on our side now and we will conquer you once and for all!" "Ha, Ha, Ha" the sound that came from her was a loud mirthless laugh. The giants and centaurs came stomping and yelling as they went. They ripped, crushed and shot arrows at Mim Be and Shia's people while they advanced towards the castle. Shanna got Mim Be surrounded by goblins and Shia tied up. Just when it seemed like Shanna and her people were about to be overcome Mim Be started whispering to Shia and they made a plan that went like this: "Now" shouted Mim Be and Shanna looked up in surprise; she didn't expect them to try again after they were badly defeated. Shia waved her hand and there was a bang and a flash of light; then there was smoke, lots of it, enough to cover up Mim Be from sight. Then Mim Be burst free with a loud "Ha!" Mim Be shot away from the chains and came upon Shanna. "Don't hurt me" cried Shanna, almost bursting into tears. "We won't if you go away and never come back" Said Mim Be and even though she spoke in a quiet voice it still carried across the field. "It's just ttthhat I aaawlays wanted friends." blubbered Shanna. "Really?" asked Shia. "Yyyes" whimpered Shanna. "Well you could stay here if you promised to not use magic against us anymore." lectured Shia. "Deal" Shanna happily yelled. From then on Shanna, Mim Be, and Shia were inseparable. And that's how Shanna, Mim Be and Shia are best friends to this day. The End.

Year Round School is a good idea because it helps student academic achievement. One reason is that just because there's more time does not mean more time sitting in classrooms it means there's sometimes additional time for core academics and you also get time to get more time for activities like art, music, and sports. Another reason is that there's lots of opportunities for many students to receive individualized or small group sessions which means they get more help and they get better at school. Jennifer Davis says "more time does not mean just more of the same—more time sitting in classrooms." Finally you don't always sit in classroom you do projects that make learning fun. Some schools have an art project that mixes both history and geometry. Even while your in school you learn things even though you don't realize it you increase your academic achievement.

Fairy Tale

Once upon a time there were two best friends named Mim Be and Shia. They were both pretty and powerful princesses. They lived a mile from each other in huge white castles. They both had special super powers. Mim Be has an idenic memory and Shia has super speed. They both have magic powers, but they could only use it for good. But one day an evil sorcerer came to town and her name was Shanna. She only had magic powers. But since everyone knew Shanna, she had to disguise herself as a poor peddler. As she hobbled into the castle Shia quickly called Mim Be and she said, "I heard from one of my magic apprentices that the evil Shanna has come to town and disguised herself as a poor peddler." I will come straight away to help you." Exclaimed Shia. "Okay thank you so much!" said Mim Be. Not one minute later Shia came walking in like the walk was only 1 foot and not one mile. Mim Be quickly chided herself and remembered that Shia had super speed. Then an apprentice yelled with his magically louder voice "Shanna is coming. I repeat, Shanna is coming. Everyone hide except for the magicians and the two princesses. By the way Shia, your magicians are also coming. Everyone prepare yourselves for battle! By the way apprentices, you will be fighting as well!" The whole time Mim Be and Shia were telling everyone to get the weapons, amour and supplies. The non-magic people would be helping the wounded and hungry. Not one minute later the evil Shanna came with her evil followers. (They were all magical people or creatures.)  The magicians of Shia and Mim Be started to murmur some words to start the war. "Wait, if we start the whole war it will be our fault so let them attack first!" shouted Mim Be. "Exactly right!" said Shia. "Attack!" screamed Shanna. Instantly 500 bad magicians started murmuring spells. (That isn't exactly good.) So Mim Be shouted over the noise "Defend our home!" They ran into the fight and started doing spells. Mim Be and Shia fought Shanna herself.  Mim Be slashed at Shanna while Shia whirled and shot spells at her. Shanna, the whole time was deflecting every single spell and was shooting numerous spells at them both. Then came a loud cry from the forest and Shanna screamed "Ha, the giants and the centaurs are on our side now and we will conquer you once and for all!" "Ha, Ha, Ha" the sound that came from her was a loud mirthless laugh. The giants and centaurs came stomping and yelling as they went. They ripped, crushed and shot arrows at Mim Be and Shia's people while they advanced towards the castle. Shanna got Mim Be surrounded by goblins and Shia tied up. Just when it seemed like Shanna and her people were about to be overcome.

Fairy Tale!

 

Once a upon there was two best friends named Mim Be and Shia. They were both pretty and powerful princesses. They both lived a mile from each other. They both had special super powers. Mim Be has an idenic memory and Shia has super speed. They both have magic powers but they could only use it for good. But one day an evil sorcerer came to town and her name was Shanna. She only had magic. But since everyone knew Shanna, she had to disguise herself as a poor peddler. As she hobbled into the castle Shia quickly called Mim Be and she said "I head from a magic apprentice that the evil Shanna has come to town and disguised herself as a poor peddler." I will come straight away to help you." Exclaimed Shia. "Okay thank you so much!" said Mim Be. Not one minute later Shia came walking in like the walk was only 1 foot and not one mile. Mim Be quickly chided herself and remembered that Shia had super speed. Then a apprentice yelled with his magically louder voice "Shanna is coming. I repeat, Shanna is coming. Everyone hide except for the magicians and the two princesses. By the way Shia, your magicians are also coming. Everyone prepare yourselves for battle! By the way apprentices, you will be fighting as well!" The whole time Mim Be and Shia were telling everyone to get the weapons, amour and supplies. The non-magic people would be helping the wounded and hungry. Not one minute later the evil Shanna came with her evil followers. (They were all magical.)  The magicians of Shia and Mim Be started to murmur some words to start the war. "Wait, if we start the whole war will be are fault so let them attack first!" shouted Mim Be. "Exactly right!" said Shia. "Attack!" screamed Shanna. Instantly 500 bad magicians started murmuring spells. (That isn't exactly good.) So Mim Be shouted over the noise "Defend our home!" They ran into the fight and started doing spells. Mim Be and Shia fought Shanna herself.







Once a upon there was two best friends named Mim Be and Shia. They were both pretty and powerful princesses. They both lived a mile from each other. They both had special super powers. Mim Be has an idenic memory and Shia has super speed. They both have magic powers but they could only use it for good. But one day an evil sorcerer came to town and her name was Shanna. She only had magic. But since everyone knew Shanna, she had to disguise herself as a poor peddler. As she hobbled into the castle Shia quickly called Mim Be and she said "I head from a magic apprentice that the evil Shanna has come to town and disguised herself as a poor peddler." I will come straight away to help you." Exclaimed Shia. "Okay thank you so much!" said Mim Be. Not one minute later Shia came walking in like the walk was only 1 foot and not one mile. Mim Be quickly chided herself and remembered that Shia had super speed. Then a apprentice yelled with his magically louder voice "Shanna is coming. I repeat, Shanna is coming. Everyone hide except for the magicians and the two princesses. By the way Shia, your magicians are also coming. Everyone prepare yourselves for battle! By the way apprentices, you will be fighting as well!" The whole time Mim Be and Shia were telling everyone to get the weapons, amour and supplies. The other not magic people would be helping the wounded and hungry.

Once a upon there was two best friends Mim Be and Shia. They were both princesses. They both lived a mile from each other. They both had special super powers. Mim Be has an idenic memory and Shia has super speed. They both have magic. But one day an evil socrer came to town and her name was Shanna. She only had magic.

Hi. Once a upon a time there was a very good princess and a very bad princess. The good princesses name was Crystal and the very bad princesses name was Rosebud. Crystal did almost all of  her work by herself and if she did hire a maid or something she paid them a lot and threated them with respect. Rosebud had a different maid for every single thing in the castle.

Year Round School is a good idea. Year round school affects ademic achievement in a good way because it increases student ablity because they don't have such a long vacation. Year round schools have lower dropout rates (2%) than tradtional shools (5%) becuase you get multiple breaks which means you get lots of chances to refresh and restart your learning jorneys. That is why year round school is a good idea

Song called "What are you thinking?"

As I'm sitting there I see you playing the cello like it just let out a bello and as I see you trying to play the base with the very dumb case, I start to sing "What are thinking?" You're now playing the viola like it just drank a cup of Coke Cola. I'm strumming my guitar as I'm singing "What are you thinking?" as I'm sitting there watching you playing your instruments. You look over here and you just smile and look away but I start singing anyway "You're doing a great job with your instruments, but keep on trying and you'll keep on flying today!"

We worked on our spelling lists

Boom, Crash, Bang! Princess Isabella leapt up from her blue sparkly, stuffed chair. She yelled to her servant "What is that terrible noise coming from the kitchen?" "Sorry Princess" said the servant who was already in the process of bowing to her. "Well you better go see what it is or you'll get kicked out of my palace!" growled Isabella. "Yes ma'am as Gorge scurried away to the kitchen. 

Year round school is a great idea. I go to a tradtional school and I usually forget something I learned in school over the school year. Yar round school students have more than one break throught the year you have lots of chances to refresh and restart their learning journey. Studies show that year round education increaces student ablity becuase the students don't have such a long vacation. Year round schools have lower dropout rates (2 percent) than traditional schools (5 percent). That is why I think year round schools are a good idea.

We worked on our Wiki to make pages and we had a read aloud.

We worked on a Fact and Opinion Sheet.

Here is the link to my Thanksgiving poem video for extra credit.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hM6gvi5zm_c&feature=youtu.be

We did a packet and read a story about L. Hughes.

Thanks

 I am thankful for my mom because she takes care of me.
I am thankful for my dad who plays with me and is always cheerful.
I am thankful for food because without it I would starve.
I am thankful for a house to protect me from the cold and rain.
I am thankful for my fish Goldie and Pinky because they make me happy when I am sad.
I am thankful for Christmas because it means we are all happy.
I am thankful for Thanksgiving because we are all in a thankful mood.
I am thankful for friends because without them I would be lonely.
I am thankful for my dad's store because without it we would be poor.
I am thankful for books because with them I can learn things.
I am thankful for a bed to sleep in because it helps me go to sleep.
I am thankful for my aunt and uncle because she helps us so much.
I am thankful for my cousin because she is so nice and happy.
I am thankful for school because we get to learn and play.
I am thankful for teachers because they are patient and nice.
I am thankful for my grandma because even though she's half way around the world she still cares about me and still loves me.

We didn't get time to make a video because we were brainstorming too long.

Here is my link to my performance peice

 http://youtu.be/n0HChl2Fv04

This is my published piece.

Best Birthday!

Pop! I woke up to the smell of fresh eggs, bacon and the loud sound of a balloon popping. My brain instantly reminded me it was Saturday and my tenth birthday which was on June 22, 2013.

I instantly remembered my sixth birthday, how I woke up the same way in I did today and then it hit me. I knew right at that moment it was going to be the best birthday ever.

Then I slowly opened my eyes and was welcomed by the soft beam of the sunlight on my face. I slowly got out of bed and went to the kitchen to eat breakfast.

As soon as I entered I said "papa, good morning and what's for breakfast?"

  My dad answered "Good morning and we're having bacon, eggs, toast, and apple juice!"

Then my dad gave me my breakfast just he said, it's my favorite! I sat down to eat and it was as delicious as a fresh baked cake!

When I finished breakfast my mom gave me my present, it was sky blue leggings with grass green spots. My dad gave me a shiny green top with cotton white stripes.

I nearly screamed "OMG thank you so much!"

Until I realized that I was so excited that I was thinking what I wanted to say so then I actually said what I wanted to say.

My parents said in unison "your welcome!" I then got cleaned up then put on my new clothes. I looked at myself in the mirror and the clothes I put on were so pretty.

Then when I thought there wasn't any surprises left my parents gave me a brand new book, "Finding Zasha." I was about to sit down and start reading the book but then it was time to go to my birthday at "Skate World."

We got into the car which was cherry red, and my dad turned up the music to my favorite song "Everyday." Soon we were all singing and in no time we were there. My dad parked in the huge black parking lot.

When we got out of the car we met Zoe who was coming to my birthday party.

Slowly one by one each person came and as soon as they were all there they said "one, two, three go!"

Then the song "Happy Birthday" came from the silence and was playing so loud I thought there was a D.J speaker right next to me.

Then realizing it was my friends who were singing the song I smiled and let them finish. The moment they finished they all screamed out "Surprise!"

I shouted out "thank you so much!"

Then they all burst into laughter that was so loud the parents inside thought someone was badly hurt. After they realized that it was just laughter even the parents started laughing.

Then laughing and talking we all skipped into the building to start roller skating.

This is my performance piece.
 http://youtu.be/n0HChl2Fv04
This is my published piece.

 

 

I was with Mrs.Clark.

I took my test.

I was working on my story telling

Best Birthday!
   Pop! I woke up to the smell of fresh eggs, bacon and the loud sound of a balloon popping.
   My brain instantly reminded me it was Saturday and my tenth birthday which was on June 22, 2013.
   I instantly remembered my sixth birthday, how I woke up the same way in I did today and then it hit me.
   I knew right, at that moment it was going to be the best birthday ever.
   Then I slowly opened my eyes and was welcomed by the soft beam of the sunlight on my face. I slowly got out of bed and went to the kitchen to eat breakfast. As soon as I entered I said "papa, good morning and what's for breakfast?"
   My dad answered "Good morning and we're having bacon, eggs, toast, and apple juice!" Then my dad gave me my breakfast just he said, it's my favorite! I sat down to eat and it was as delicious as a fresh baked cake! When I finished breakfast my mom gave me my present, it was sky blue leggings with grass green spots. My dad gave me a shiny green top with cotton white stripes.
   I nearly screamed "OMG thank you so much!" Until I realized that I was so excited that I was thinking what I wanted to say so then I actually said what I wanted to say.
   My parents said in unison "your welcome!" I then got cleaned up then put on my new clothes. I looked at myself in the mirror and the clothes I put on were so pretty.
   Then when I thought there wasn't any surprises left my parents gave me a brand new book, "Finding Zasha." I was about to sit down and start reading the book but then it was time to go to my birthday at "Skate World."
   We got into the car which was cherry red, and my dad turned up the music to my favorite song "Everyday." Soon we were all singing and in no time we were there. My dad parked in the huge black parking lot.
   When we got out of the car we met Zoe who was coming to my birthday party. Slowly one by one each person came and as soon as they were all there they said "one, two, three go!"
   Then the song "Happy Birthday" came from the silence and was playing so loud I thought there was a D.J speaker right next to me. Then realizing it was my friends who were singing the song I smiled and let them finish.
   The moment they finished they all screamed out "Surprise!"
   I shouted out "thank you so much!"
   Then they all burst into laughter that was so loud the parents inside thought someone was badly hurt.
   After they realized that it was just laughter even the parents started laughing. Then laughing and talking we all skipped into the building to start roller skating.
   While we were on our way to the building I thought about when I told myself it was going to be the best birthday ever. I knew I was going to be right! On that happy I thought I joined in laughing and talking as we entered the building.

My 10th Birthday! Pop! I woke up to the smell of fresh eggs, bacon and the loud sound of a balloon popping. My brain instantly reminded me it was Saturday and my tenth birthday which was on June 22, 2013. I instantly remembered my sixth birthday, how I woke up the same way and I knew right then that it was going to be the best birthday ever. Then I slowly opened my eyes and was welcomed by the soft beam of the sunlight on my face. I slowly got out of bed and went to the kitchen to eat breakfast. My parents surprised me by jumping out at me and singing "Happy Birthday" then my parents gave me my breakfast, it was bacon, eggs, toast, and apple juice, my favorite! I sat down to eat and it was delicious as a fresh baked cake! When I finished breakfast my mom gave me my present, it was sky blue leggings with grass green spots. My dad gave me a emerald green top with cloud white stripes. I nearly screamed "OMG thank you so much!" Until I realized that I was so excited that I was thinking what I wanted to say so then I actually said what I wanted to say. I then got cleaned up then put on my new clothes. I looked at myself in the mirror and the clothes I put on were so pretty. Then when I thought there wasn't any surprises left my parents gave me a brand new book, "Finding Zasha." I was about to sit down and start reading the book but then it was time to go to my birthday at "Skate World." We got into the car which was red, and my dad turned up the music to my favorite song "Everyday." Soon we were all singing and in no time we were there. My dad parkedWhen we got out of the car we met Zoe who was coming to my birthday party. Slowly one by one each person came and as soon as they were all there they said "one, two, three go!" Then the song "Happy Birthday" came from the silence and was playing so loud I thought there was a D.J speaker right next to me. Then realizing it was my friends who were singing the song I smiled and let them finish. The moment they finished they all screamed out "Surprise!" I shouted out "thank you so much!" Then they all burst into laughter that was so loud the parents inside thought someone was badly hurt. After they realized that it was just laughter even the parents started laughing. Then laughing and talking we all skipped into the building to start roller skating.

I was working on my story telling.

My 10th Birthday! Pop! I woke up to the smell of fresh eggs, bacon and the loud sound of a balloon popping. My brain instantly reminded me it was Saturday and my tenth birthday which was on June 22, 2013. I instantly remembered my sixth birthday, how I woke up the same way and I knew right then that it was going to be the best birthday ever. Then I slowly opened my eyes and was welcomed by the soft beam of the sunlight on my face. I slowly got out of bed and went to the kitchen to eat breakfast. My parents surprised me by jumping out at me and singing "Happy Birthday" then my parents gave me my breakfast, it was bacon, eggs, toast, and apple juice, my favorite! I sat down to eat and it was delicious as a fresh baked cake! When I finished breakfast my mom gave me my present, it was sky blue leggings with grass green spots. My dad gave me a emerald green top with cloud white stripes. I nearly screamed "OMG thank you so much!" Until I realized that I was so excited that I was thinking what I wanted to say so then I actually said what I wanted to say. I then got cleaned up then put on my new clothes. I looked at myself in the mirror and the clothes I put on were so pretty. Then when I thought there wasn't any surprises left my parents gave me a brand new book, "Finding Zasha." I was about to sit down and start reading the book but then it was time to go to my birthday at "Skate World." We got into the car which was red, and my dad turned up the music to my favorite song "Everyday." Soon we were all singing and in no time we were there. My dad parkedWhen we got out of the car we met Zoe who was coming to my birthday party. Slowly one by one each person came and as soon as they were all there they said "one, two, three go!" Then the song "Happy Birthday" came from the silence and was playing so loud I thought there was a D.J speaker right next to me. Then realizing it was my friends who were singing the song I smiled and let them finish. The moment they finished they all screamed out "Surprise!" I shouted out "thank you so much!" Then they all burst into laughter that was so loud the parents inside thought someone was badly hurt. After they realized that it was just laughter even the parents started laughing. Then laughing and talking we all skipped into the building to start roller skating.

My 10th Birthday!
 Pop! I woke up to the smell of fresh eggs, bacon and the loud sound of a balloon popping. My brain instantly reminded me it was Saturday and my tenth birthday which was on June 22, 2013. I instantly remembered my sixth birthday, how I woke up the same way and I knew right then that it was going to be the best birthday ever. Then I slowly opened my eyes and was welcomed with the soft beam of the sunlight on my face. I slowly got out of bed and went to the kitchen to eat breakfast. My parents surprised me by jumping out at me and singing "Happy Birthday" then they gave me my breakfast, it was bacon, eggs, toast, and apple juice, my favorite! I sat down to eat and it was delicious as a fresh baked cake! When I finished breakfast, my mom gave me my present, it was sky blue leggings with grass green spots. My dad gave me an emerald green top that had cloud white stripes. I nearly screamed "OMG thank you so much!" Until I realized that I was so excited that I was thinking what I wanted to say so then I actually said what I wanted to say. I then got cleaned up then put on my new clothes. I looked at myself in the mirror and the clothes I put on were so pretty. Then when I thought there wasn't any surprises left my parents gave me a brand new book, "Finding Zasha." I was about to sit down and start reading the book but then it was time to go to my birthday at "Skate World." We got into the car which was red, and my dad turned up the music to my favorite song "Everyday." Soon we were all singing and in no time we were there. When we got out of the car we met Zoe who was coming to my birthday party. Slowly one by one each person came and as soon as they were all there they said "one, two, three go!" Then the song "Happy Birthday" came from the silence and was playing so loud I thought there was a D.J speaker right next to me. Then realizing it was my friends who were singing the song so I smiled and let them finish. The moment they finished they all screamed out "Surprise!" I shouted out "thank you so much!" Then they all burst into laughter that was so loud the parents inside thought someone was badly hurt. After they realized that it was just laughter even the parents started laughing. Then laughing and talking we all skipped into the building to start roller skating.

My 10th Birthday! Pop! I woke up to the smell of fresh eggs, bacon and the loud sound of a balloon popping. My brain instantly reminded me it was Saturday and my tenth birthday which was on June 22, 2013. I instantly remembered my sixth birthday, how I woke up the same way and I knew right then that it was going to be the best birthday ever. Then I slowly opened my eyes and was welcomed with the soft beam of the sunlight on my face. I slowly got out of bed and went to the kitchen to eat breakfast. My parents surprised me by jumping out at me and singing "Happy Birthday" then they gave me my breakfast, it was bacon, eggs, toast, and apple juice, my favorite! I sat down to eat and it was delicious as a fresh baked cake! When I finished breakfast my mom gave me my present, it was sky blue leggings with grass green spots. My dad gave me a emerald green top with cloud white stripes. I nearly screamed "OMG thank you so much!" Until I realized that I was so excited that I was thinking what I wanted to say so then I actually said what I wanted to say. I then got cleaned up then put on my new clothes. I looked at myself in the mirror and the clothes I put on were so pretty. Then when I thought there wasn't any surprises left my parents gave me a brand new book, "Finding Zasha." I was about to sit down and start reading the book but then it was time to go to my birthday at "Skate World." We got into the car which was red, and my dad turned up the music to my favorite song "Everyday." Soon we were all singing and in no time we were there. When we got out of the car we met Zoe who was coming to my birthday party. Slowly one by one each person came and as soon as they were all there they said "one, two, three go!" Then the song "Happy Birthday" came from the silence and was playing so loud I thought there was a D.J speaker right next to me. Then realizing it was my friends who were singing the song so I smiled and let them finish. The moment they finished they all screamed out "Surprise!" I shouted out "thank you so much!" Then they all burst into laughter that was so loud the parents inside thought someone was badly hurt. After they realized that it was just laughter even the parents started laughing. Then laughing and talking we all skipped into the building to start roller skating.

My Birthday

 Pop! I woke up to the smell of fresh eggs, bacon and the loud sound of a balloon popping. My brain instantly reminded me it was Saturday and my tenth birthday which was on June 22, 2013. I instantly remembered my sixth birthday, how I woke up the same way and I knew right then that it was going to be the best birthday ever. Then I slowly opened my eyes and was welcomed with the soft beam of the sunlight on my face. I slowly got out of bed and went to the kitchen to eat breakfast. My parents surprised my by jumping out at me and singing "Happy Birthday" then they gave me my breakfast, it was bacon, eggs, toast, and apple juice, my favorite! I sat down to eat and it was delicious as a fresh baked cake! When I finished breakfast my mom gave me my present, it was sky blue leggings with grass green spots, my dad gave me a emerald green top with cloud white stripes. I nearly screamed "OMG thank you so much!" Until I realized that I was so excited that I was thinking what I wanted to say so then I actually said what I wanted to say. I then got cleaned up then put on my new clothes. I looked at myself in the mirror and the clothes I put on were so pretty. Then when I thought there wasn't any surprises left my parents gave me a brand new book, "Finding Zasha." I was about to sit down and start reading the book but then it was time to go to my birthday at "Skate World." We got into the car which was a and my dad turned up the music to my favorite song "Everyday." Soon we were all singing and in no time we were there. When we got out of the car we met Zoe who was coming to my birthday party. Slowly one by one each person came and as soon as they were all there they said "one, two, three go!" Then the song "Happy Birthday" came from the silence and was playing so loud I thought there was a D.J speaker right next to me. Then realizing it was my friends who were singing the song so I smiled and let them finish. The moment they finished they all screamed out "Surprise!" I shouted out "thank you so much!" Then they all burst into laughter that was so loud the parents inside thought someone was badly hurt. After they realized that it was just laughter even the parents started laughing. Then laughing and talking we all skipped into the building to start roller skating.

My Birthday! Pop! I woke up to the smell of fresh eggs, bacon and the loud sound of a balloon popping. My brain instantly reminded me it was Saturday and my tenth birthday which was on June 22, 2013. I instantly remembered my 6th birthday, how I woke up the same way and I knew right then that it was going to be the best birthday ever. Then I slowly opened my eyes and was welcomed with the soft beam of the sunlight on my face. I slowly got out of bed and went to the kitchen to eat breakfast. My parents surprised my by jumping out at me and singing "Happy Birthday" then they gave me my breakfast, it was bacon, eggs, toast, and apple juice, my favorite! I sat down to eat and it was delicious as a fresh baked cake! When I finished breakfast my mom gave me my present, it was sky blue leggings with grass green spots, my dad gave me a emerald green top with cloud white stripes. I nearly screamed "Omg thank you so much." Until I realized that I was so excited that I was thinking what I wanted to say so then I actually said what I wanted to say. I then got cleaned up then put on my new clothes. I looked at myself in the mirror and the clothes I put on were so pretty. Then when I thought there wasn't any surprises left my parents gave me a brand new book, "Finding Zasha." I was about to sit down and start reading the book but then it was time to go to my birthday at "Skate World." We got into the car which was a and my dad turned up the music to my favorite song "Everyday." Soon we were all singing and in no time we were there. When we got out of the car we met Zoe who was coming to my birthday party. Slowly one by one each person came and as soon as they were all there they said "one, two, three go!" Then the song "Happy Birthday" came from the silence and was playing so loud I thought there was a D.J speaker right next to me. Then realizing it was my friends who were singing the song so I smiled and let them finish. The moment they finished they all screamed out "Surprise!" I shouted out "thank you so much!" Then they all burst into laughter that was so loud the parents inside thought someone was badly hurt. After they realized that it was just laughter even the parents started laughing. Then laughing and talking we all skipped into the building to start roller skating.

Clomp, clomp, clomp I went. I shouldn't have worn snow boots I thought. My cloud white angel dress was getting soaked and I didn't get any candy yet. I wasn't going to give up I thought. My dad and I decided we would go out in the freezing cold and the hard rain to go trick or treating. Whoosh went the wind, I yelled to my dad so he could hear me over the roar of the wind. "Papa can we go to the other subdivision when we're done with this neighborhood?" He yelled back we'll seeWhen I was stepping up to the first house on the block, which was also the festive house on the block it was decorated with 5 pumpkins not one or two or three or four but five, five pumpkins there was also a smoke machine. I was gasped and was so surprised I nearly let go of my umbrella. I gave my dad my umbrella and I sprinted up to the door and my dad shouted don't forget to say trick to treat! I rang the doorbell with anticipation and yelled trick or treat! A woman about twenty answered the door and said "well hello there!"

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My Birthday! Pop! I woke up to the smell of fresh eggs, bacon and the loud sound of a balloon popping. My brain instantly reminded me it was Saturday and my tenth birthday which was on June 22, 2013. I instantly remembered my 6th birthday, how I woke up the same way and I knew right then that it was going to be the best birthday ever. Then I slowly opened my eyes and was welcomed with the soft beam of the sunlight on my face. I slowly got out of bed and went to the kitchen to eat breakfast. My parents surprised my by jumping out at me and singing "Happy Birthday" then they gave me my breakfast, it was bacon, eggs, toast, and apple juice, my favorite! I sat down to eat and it was delicious as a fresh baked cake! When I finished breakfast my mom gave me my present, it was sky blue leggings with grass green spots, my dad gave me a emerald green top with cloud white stripes. I nearly screamed "Omg thank you so much." Until I realized that I was so excited that I was thinking what I wanted to say so then I actually said what I wanted to say. I then got cleaned up then put on my new clothes. I looked at myself in the mirror and the clothes I put on were so pretty. Then when I thought there wasn't any surprises left my parents gave me a brand new book, "Finding Zasha." I was about to sit down and start reading the book but then it was time to go to my birthday at "Skate World." We got into the car which was a and my dad turned up the music to my favorite song "Everyday." When we got got there we met Zoe who was coming to my birthday party. Slowly one by one each person came and as soon as they were all there they said "one, two, three go!" Then the song "Happy Birthday" came from the silence and was playing so loud I thought there was a D.J speaker right next to me. Then realizing it was my friends who were singing the song so I smiled and let them finish. The moment they finished they all screamed out "Surprise!" I shouted out "thank you so much!" Then they all burst into laughter that was so loud the parents inside thought someone was badly hurt. After they realized that it was just laughter even the parents started laughing. Then laughing and talking we all skipped into the building to start roller skating.

My Birthday! Pop! I woke up to the smell of fresh eggs, bacon and the loud sound of a balloon popping. My brain instantly reminded me it was Saturday and my tenth birthday which was on June 22, 2013. I instantly remembered my 6th birthday how I woke up the same way and I just the right then that it was going to be the best birthday ever. Then I slowly opened my eyes and was welcomed with the soft light like a of the sun on my face. I slowly got out of bed and went to the kitchen to eat breakfast. My parents surprised my by jumping out at me and singing "Happy Birthday" then gave me my breakfast, it was bacon, eggs, toast, and apple juice. I sat down to eat and it was delicious as a fresh baked cake! When I finished breakfast my mom gave me my present, it was blue leggings with green spots, my dad gave me a green top with white stripes. I said Omg thank you so much. Until I realized that I was so excited that I was thinking what I wanted to say so then I actually said what I wanted to say. I then got cleaned up then put on my new clothes. I looked at myself in the mirror and the clothes I put on were so pretty. Then when I thought there wasn't any surprises left my parents gave me a brand new book, "Finding Zasha." I was about to sit down and start reading the book but then it was time to go to my birthday at "Skate World." We got into the car which was a and my dad turned up the music to my favorite song "Everyday." When we got got there we met Zoe who was coming to my birthday party. Slowly one by one each person came and as soon as they were all there they said "one, two, three go!" Then the song "Happy Birthday" came from the silence and was playing so loud I thought there was a D.J speaker right next to me. Then realizing it was my friends who were singing the song so I smiled and let them finish. The moment they finished they all screamed out "Surprise!" I shouted out "thank you so much!" Then they all burst into laughter that was so loud the parents inside thought someone was badly hurt. After they realized that it was just laughter even the parents started laughing. Then laughing and talking we all skipped into the building to start roller skating.

My Birthday! Pop! I woke up to the smell of fresh eggs, bacon and the loud sound of a balloon popping. My brain instantly reminded me it was Saturday and my tenth birthday which was on June 22, 2013. I slowly opened my eyes and was welcomed with the soft light like a of the sun on my face. I was thinking to myself, this is going to be the best birthday ever. I slowly got out of bed and went to the kitchen to eat breakfast. My parents surprised my by jumping out at me and singing "Happy Birthday" then gave me my breakfast, it was bacon, eggs, toast, and apple juice. I sat down to eat and it was delicious! When I finished breakfast my mom gave me my present, it was blue leggings with green spots, my dad gave me a green top with white stripes. I said OMG thank you so much. Until I realized that I was so excited that I was thinking what I wanted to say so then I actually said what I wanted to say. I then got cleaned up then put on my new clothes. I looked at myself in the mirror and the clothes I put on were so pretty. Then when I thought there wasn't any surprises left my parents gave me a brand new book, "Finding Zasha." I was about to sit down and start reading the book but then it was time to go to my birthday at "Skate World." We got into the car and my dad turned up the music to my favorite song "Everyday." When we got got there we met Zoe who was coming to my birthday party. Slowly one by one each person came and as soon as they came they said "one, two, three go!" Then the song "Happy Birthday" came from the silence and was playing so loud I thought there was a D.J speaker right next to me. Then realizing it was my friends who were singing the song so I smiled and let them finish. The moment they finished they all screamed out "Surprise!" I shouted out "thank you so much!" Then they all burst into laughter that was so loud the parents inside thought someone was badly hurt. After they realized that it was just laughter even the parents started laughing. Then laughing and talking we all skipped into the building to start roller skating.

My Birthday! Pop! I woke up to the smell of fresh eggs, bacon and the loud sound of a balloon popping. My brain instantly reminded me it was Saturday and my tenth birthday which was on June 22, 2013. I slowly opened my eyes and was welcomed with the soft light of the sun on my face. I was thinking to myself, this is going to be the best birthday ever. I slowly got out of bed and went to the kitchen to eat breakfast. My parents surprised my by jumping out at me and singing "Happy Birthday" then gave me my breakfast, it was bacon, eggs, toast, and apple juice. I sat down to eat and it was delicious! When I finished breakfast my mom gave me my present, it was blue leggings with green spots, my dad gave me a green top with white stripes. I gasped so loudly my parents thought there was a som detector going off in the house. I then got cleaned up then put on my new clothes. I looked at myself in the mirror and the clothes I put on were so pretty. Then when I thought there wasn't any surprises left my parents gave me a brand new book, "Finding Zasha." I was about to sit down and start reading the book but then it was time to go to my birthday at "Skate World." We got into the car and my dad turned up the music to my favorite song "Everyday." When we got got there we met Zoe who was coming to my birthday party. Slowly one by one each person came and as soon as they came they said "one, two, three go!" Then the song "Happy Birthday" came from the silence and was playing so loud I thought there was a D.J speaker right next to me. Then realizing it was my friends who were singing the song so I smiled and let them finish. The moment they finished they all screamed out "Surprise!" Then they all burst into laughter that was so loud the parents inside thought someone was badly hurt. After they realized that it was just laughter even the parents started laughing. Then laughing and talking we all skipped into the building to start roller skating.

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My Birthday! Pop! I woke up to the smell of fresh eggs, bacon and the loud sound of a balloon popping. My brain instantly reminded me it was Saturday and my tenth birthday which was on June 22, 2013. I slowly opened my eyes and was welcomed with the soft light of the sun on my face. I was thinking to myself, this is going to be the best birthday ever. I slowly got out of bed and went to the kitchen to eat breakfast. My parents surprised my by jumping out at me and singing "Happy Birthday" then gave me my breakfast, it was bacon, eggs, toast, and appjle juice. I sat down to eat and it was delicious! When I finished breakfast my mom gave me my present, it was blue leggings with green spots, my dad gave me a green top with white stripes. I gasped so loudly my parents thought there was a som detector going off in the house. I then got cleaned up then put on my new clothes. I looked at myself in the mirror and the clothes I put on were so pretty. Then when I thought there wasn't any surprises left my parents gave me a brand new book, "Finding Zasha." I was about to sit down and start reading the book but then it was time to go to my birthday at "Skate World." We got into the car and my dad turned up the music to my favorite song "Everyday." When we got got there we met Zoe who was coming to my birthday party. Slowly one by one each person came and as soon as they came they said "one, two, three go!" Then the song "Happy Birthday" came from the silence and was playing so loud I though that there was a DJ speaker right next to me.Then realizing that my friends who were singing the song so I smiled and waited for them to finish. The moment they finished they screamed out "Surprise!" Then they all burst into laughter so loud the parents inside came out in a hurry wondering who was hurt. Then laughing and talking we all skipped into the building.

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My Birthday! Pop! I woke up to smell of fresh eggs, bacon and the sound of a balloon popping. My brain instantly reminded my it was my birthday, June 22, 2013. I slowly opened my eyes and was welcomed with the soft light of the sun on my face. I was thinking to myself, this is going to be the best birthday day ever. I slowly got out of bed and went to the kitchen to eat breakfast. My parents surprised my by jumping out at me and singing "Happy Birthday" then gave me my breakfast, it was bacon, eggs, toast, and apple juice. I sat down to eat and it was delicious! When I finished breakfast my mom gave me my present, it was blue leggings with green spots, my dad gave me a green top with white stripes. I then got cleaned up then put on my new clothes. I looked at myself in the mirror and the clothes I put on were so pretty. Then I got one more surprise, my parents gave me a brand new book! Then it was time to go to my birthday party at skate world. We got in the car and my dad turned up the music and we stated singing at the top of our lungs. When I looked out the window I saw a huge rainbow like it was smiling down at me. When we got out we met Zoe who was coming to my birthday party. Slowly one by one each person came and as soon as they came thy said " one, two, three now." laughing we walked into the building

The Water Park! Me and my best friend Zoe scrambled out of car and sprinted as fast as we could into the water park. As soon as we got in we both had to cover our ears and shout at each other just to hear each other. The noise was the sound of like 2 tons of water pouring down a huge hill. As we turned the corner I nearly passed out because there was a huge water slide that was 8 stories tall. It was as white the clouds with spots that was as blue as a sapphire. There were was 10 loops and 7 turns but you couldn't go on it without a friend because you have to go on a two person raft. There was two different slides one dark slide and one light slide. You would land in a huge pool of water when you were done. So me and Zoe did the long climb up the stairs but when we got to the top I said OMG where's our raft. Zoe looked around then screamed at the top of her lungs "what have you done?" Then Zoe turned into a little spitfire. Zoe and I slowly did the long climb down the stairs and the long climb upstairs. Finally we got our emerald green raft and it was our turn. I thought when we were getting in our raft this is going to be the scariest but then Zoe shook me and go me to reality. We slowly pushed off and we were staring, after five seconds there was a loop and we screamed the whole time we were on the loop but after that me and Zoe were laughing and talking the whole time down. We were so busy laughing we didn't even notice that we were about to hit the water. 5 seconds later we were underwater. When me and Zoe got to the surface we looked at each other for one second then together we shouted "again" and swam to the stairs to do it again.

The Water Park! Me and my best friend Zoe, walked into the water park, and we both gasped because there was a huge water slide it was a 8 story water slide. It was white with blue spots, there was 10 loops and 7 turns but you couldn't go on it without a friend because you have to go on a two person raft. There was two different slides one dark slide and one light slide. You would land in a huge pool of water when you were done. So me and Zoe did the long climb up the stairs but when we got to the top I said OMG where's our raft, so Zoe and I had to do the long climb down the stairs the the long climb upstairs. Finally we got our raft and it was our turn. I thought when we were getting in our raft this is going to be so scary but then Zoe shook me and go me to reality. We slowly pushed off and we were staring, after five seconds there was a loop and we screamed the whole time we were on the loop but after that me and Zoe were laughing and talking the whole time down. We were so busy laughing we didn't even notice that we were about to hit the water. 5 seconds later we were underwater. When me and Zoe got to the surface we looked at each other for one second the together we shouted "again" and swam to the stairs to do it again.

The Water Park!

Me and my best friend Zoe, walked into the water park, and we both gasped because there was a huge water slide it was a 8 story water slide. It was white with blue spots, there was 10 loops and 7 turns but you couldn't go on it without a friend because you have to go on a two person raft. There was two different slides one dark slide and one light slide. You would land in a huge pool of water when you were done. So me and Zoe did the long climb up the stairs but when we got to the top I said OMG! where is our raft, so Zoe had to do the long climb down the stairs the the long climb upstairs. Finally we got our raft and it was our turn. I thought when we were getting in our raft this is going to be so scary but then Zoe shook me and go me to reality. We slowly pushed off and we were staring, after five seconds there was a loop and we screamed the whole time we were on the loop but after that me and Zoe were laughing and talking

My Birthday! Pop! I woke up to smell of fresh eggs, bacon and the sound of a balloon popping. My brain instantly reminded my it was my birthday, June 22, 2013. I slowly opened my eyes and was welcomed with the soft light of the sun on my face. I was thinking to myself, this is going to be the best birthday day ever. I slowly got out of bed and went to the kitchen to eat breakfast. My parents surprised my by jumping out at me and singing "Happy Birthday" then gave me my breakfast, it was bacon, eggs, toast, and apple juice. I sat down to eat and it was delicious! When I finished breakfast my mom gave me my present, it was blue leggings with green spots, my dad gave me a green top with white stripes. I then got cleaned up then put on my new clothes. I looked at myself in the mirror and the clothes I put on were so pretty. Then I got one more surprise, my parents gave me a brand new book! Then it was time to go to my birthday party at skate world. When we got out we met Zoe who was coming to my birthday party. Smiling and laughing we walked into the building.

My Birthday! I woke up to smell of bacon. My brain instantly reminded my it was my birthday, June 22, 2013. I slowly opened my eyes and was welcomed with the soft light of the sun on my face. I was thinking to myself, this is going to be the best birthday day ever. I slowly got out of bed and went to the kitchen to eat breakfast. My parents surprised my by jumping out at me and singing "Happy Birthday" then gave me my breakfast, it was bacon, eggs, toast, and Apple juice. I sat down to eat and it was delicious! When I finished breakfast my mom gave me my present, it was blue leggings with green spots, my dad gave me a green top with white stripes. I then got cleaned up then put in my new clothes. I looked at myself in the mirror and the clothes I put on we're so pretty. The I got one more surprise my parents gave me a brand new book! Then it was time to my birthday party at skate world. When we got out we met Zoe who was coming to my birthday party smiling and laughing we walked into the building.

My Birthday! I woke up to smell of bacon. My brain instantly reminded my it was my birthday, June 22, 2013. I slowly opened my eyes and was welcomed with the soft light of the sun on my face. I was thinking to myself, this is going to be the best brith day ever. I slowly got out of bed and went to the kitchen to eat breakfast. jumping out at me and singing "Happy Birthday" then gave me my breakfast, it was bacon, eggs, toast, and Apple juice. I sat down to eat and it was delicious! When I finished breakfast my mom gave me my present, it was blue leggings with green spots, my dad gave me a green top with white stripes. I then got cleaned up then put in my new clothes. I looked at myself in the mirror and the clothes I put on we're so pretty. The I got one more surprise my parents gave me a brand new book! Then it was time to my birthday party at skate world. When we got out we met Zoe who was coming to my birthday party smiling and laughing we walked into the building.

My Birthday! I woke up to smell of bacon. My brain instantly reminded my it was my birthday. I slowly opened my eyes and was welcomed with the soft light of the sun on my face. I slowly got out of bed and went to the kitchen to eat breakfast. My parents surprised me by jumping out at me and singing "Happy Birthday" then gave me my breakfast

The Water park
I took a deep breath and breathed in the cool slaty pool air. I was at the Soaring Eagle water park. I stood at the beginning of the huge 5 story water slide. The water slide had 6 loops and 4 curves it was blue with yellow spots. I flashed back to when I was riding the Millennium at cedar point. I remembered how I was scared but I still did it. So I took another breath of the cool, slaty, chlorine air then when on the slide. For the first few seconds I was still scared, but then I started to enjoy myself. I was laughing so hadI brought tears to my eyes. The finally the water slide ended and I dropped into the pool. I thought to myself I am so doing that again before I started the long walk up the stairs again.

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